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smita9489
New Delhi , India
Female 47

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27 Jul 2010 07:33 pm  #1

hi friends,


i wd love to hv ur responses to my topic 'kaarvaan' meaning a group of ppl on journey.v all r part of it in ths journey of life..............guzarte hue kaarvaan ke saath hum kehte gaye,


jeeti hui aazaadi ke paanv kyun ladkhadaye,


ye shaheedon ki shahadat hai nahi haarna chahiye,


apne ghar ko to roz roz sanvaara humne,


thoda thoda hi sahi mann bhi sanvaara jaaye.


 
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SunilDudeSCO
Kanpur , India
Male 44

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28 Jul 2010 10:21 am  #2

Hi Smita!


thoda thoda hi sahi mann bhi sanvaara jaaye.


Dat is d crux Smita! The day this happens all those dreams of the freedom fighters whu gave even their lives to see a Happy n Prosperous Motherland will come true!!


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
Female 47

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28 Jul 2010 12:13 pm  #3

dharti svatantra ho gayi kintu mann nahi huaa,


kaagaz ke phoolon se harshit jann nahi huaa,


aur madhur svaron ki aashaa abhi bhi baaki hai,


sachche veeron ki aas abhi bhi baaki hai.


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
Female 47

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28 Jul 2010 03:31 pm  #4

jeevan ke khoobsurat lamhe nikharne lage,


aasha ke deep ki lau mein alokik hone lage,


aakash phir saj gayaa chaand aur taaron se,


harshit mann ho gayaa in nek vichaaron se.


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
Female 47

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28 Jul 2010 03:48 pm  #5
thanks Sunil for ur appreciation.its inspiring.i dedicate my latest lines to u........aakash saj gayaa chaand aur taaron se..........take care.
 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
Female 47

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29 Jul 2010 01:04 pm  #6

bhaavon ka indradhanush rahe,insaaniyat palti rahe,


sachchaai ki sheetaltaa mein,jhooth ki aanch talti rahe,


jaagriti mein ghuli sanskriti path pradarshan hamara kare,


khoye hue shabdon ko apni pehchaan ka daaman milta rahe,


us daaman ko pyaar ka aanchal chhanv detaa rahe.


 
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SunilDudeSCO
Kanpur , India
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30 Jul 2010 11:16 am  #7

#6


Hi Smita!!


Inshallah!!! Ameen 2 dat post of urs. It was heart touching. Smita it is a fact dat aakhri me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai!!!!


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
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30 Jul 2010 12:17 pm  #8

This topic 'kaarvaan' is vivid cos it involves lots of people having different perceptions about life primarily.


Lets discover beauty of life here as Khalil Gibran rightly said 'we live only to discover beauty.All else is a form of waiting.'


We shape and mould our lives with our thoughts our experiences and our actions.Everyday our interactions with others balance our sense of self with the rest of world around us.


The most important thing which i hv experienced myself in my life is 'move through the world with consciousness that we r the centre of universe and v wl find tht v dnt really hv to shift as ppl around us start shifting themselves.'


Thanks to all for reading this.u r welcome fr ur responses.


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
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30 Jul 2010 05:04 pm  #9

hi Sunil,


ur response has an epitome of positivity that brings a new mobility of spirit in me.thanks .........kp flowing ur responses.


.


 
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SunilDudeSCO
Kanpur , India
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30 Jul 2010 09:54 pm  #10

#8


Smita!!!!


Dat was a V mature post . I dont know u personally, but reading ur posts gives a feeling dat U stand 4 all the things dat shud reaaly happen.


Smita things r changing in d motherland of ours..... maybe in d times 2 come we will see d Motherland as OUR FOREFATHERS wanted!!!!


INSHALLAH!!!!!!


 
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jovial_sim
Patiala , India
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31 Jul 2010 12:45 am  #11
Swapan jhade phool se, meet chubhe shool se Lut gaye singar sabhi bagh ke babool se Aur hum khade-khade, bahar dekhte rahe Karvan gujar gaya, gubar dekhte rahe
 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
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31 Jul 2010 01:13 pm  #12

Sunil!!


Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!Yes i love to be as real as possible and enhance virtues to the hilt being in the shape of ordinary human as i am.


I dont know what our forefathers wanted but i surely want my earth to be incessantly loved and feel proud of its dwelling people.


Your acknowledgement to my posts shows you to be in the same league as i am.wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
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31 Jul 2010 01:18 pm  #13

hey Jovia_sim,


i too adore these lines which u mentioned here written by the great poet Neeraj.Thats why i selected this topic's name as 'Kaarvaan'.Thanks.......Do send in your more responses.............i would love it..................


 
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SunilDudeSCO
Kanpur , India
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31 Jul 2010 01:49 pm  #14

Neend bhi khuli na thi ke haye dhoop dhal gayii.....


paanv jab talak uthe ki zindagi fisal gayi.....


Paat paat jhar gaye ki shaakh shaakh jal gayi...


Chaah to nikal saki na par umar nikal gayi par umar nikal gayi...


Geet ashq ban gaye swapn ho dafan gaye saath ke sabhi diye dhuan pehen pehen gaye....


aur ham ruke ruke waqt se pite pite saaz ke sharab ke khumar dekhte rahe..


Karwan.........


 
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smita9489
New Delhi , India
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31 Jul 2010 01:56 pm  #15

hothon per hai Geeta teri aur saath saath Kuraan hai,


sapnon se pyaare desh tum,tujh per nyochhavar jaan hai.


 
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