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Suryast said: So very romantic. Mellow and soft feelings bilkul uss tasvir ki tarah jo aapne diya hai. Bahut khubsoorat kavita. Mujhe iss tarah ki kavitayein jo seedha dil se judti hai, bahut pasand hai. Shikayat hai ki abhi tak mujhse apne inhe ku chipaye rakha? January 10, '10 |
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KenFeatherlite said: Sapne aise hi hotey hain... Sapne aur samay ko na kabhi kaid kiya ja sakta hai na hi use wapas laya ja sakta hai. Bus ek yaad ban kar reh jaati hai woh: Gujra hua waqt aur toote hue sapne... Par ab aane waale din bhi hain... hain na?? Ken November 16, '09 |
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Udhas said: जागती आँखों से मानो देखूं एक सपन सा….. काश रुक जाती समय की दौड़ वहीं .... ye bhuli bisri yaadee hi to hai jo jeene ka ek hosla deti hai.... behad sundar rachna aur upmaao ka samavesh... झिलमिलाते रंग मोरपंख के नभ में चढ़ता चंद्रमा पूनम का सजे ज्यों बिंदिया निशा सुंदरी का ... aapki kavita ko pooman ke char chand lagati hai....  November 08, '09 |
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creativefront said: Kya kahoon is kavita ke liye. Fropper par shaayad aap hee hein jo itani jeevant kavita likh sakti ho. Aapkee komal bhaavanaaon ne premi ya pati kee preyasi ya patni ke saath bitaaye khoobsoorat chhanon ka aisa adbhut chitran kiya hai jisane us jeevant samay ko hee naheen yaadon ko bhee amar bana diya. Yahi hoti hai kavita. Sach mein mitra adhikaansh fropperites ko aapke saath mitrata par naaj hai. Really 5 star.  October 31, '09 |
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Gor123 said: चाहूं दृग मूंद लूँ के क़ैद कर सकूँ आत्मा की तिजोरी में पर डरती हूँ मिट ही ना जाए यह दृश्य एक सपन सा ….. excellent...one stroke poem with one feeling straightway with regard to the reality of life. some beautiful moment can be lived in this way and there is nothing wrong in it. it is a part of life. ven though they have gone one has to make them alive to live the life further ahead. this is the way  October 29, '09 |
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Heart_Of_Paradise said: Encouraging Moments of Life in a Dream... Wow  Really Amazing Thoughts with a Flow which Narrates The Dream beautifully.. My View on Dream is "A dream is a microscope through which we look at the hidden occurrences in our soul."  October 27, '09 |
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sheraju said: चाहूं दृग मूंद लूँ के क़ैद कर सकूँ आत्मा की तिजोरी में बहुत अच्छा,बहुत अच्छा October 27, '09 |
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madhumitaCAP2000 said: ateet ki meethi yadein ---shayad jeevan ka yehi sahara hain----aur mann darta hai ye sapne bhi kahi saath na chhod dein . very touching jyoti ji i can fully understand the feelinmgs conveyed October 26, '09 |
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yashvant1962 said: बहुत अच्छा लिखा है  October 26, '09 |
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devlibra2002 said: excellent October 26, '09 |
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