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Posted on: Mar 16, '08

Falling In Love with Ocean of Fear!

It is silent withdrawal of day light

Handing over this world’s keys to night

Day light keeps me always very bright

Night is a dangerously disturbing sight.

Sky dressed with frightening Red.

Fear started creeping into my head

It smashed my status of school head

Threw me longing to jump on to bed

I pleaded lord sun to stay back

He said he is not a toy in my rack

And universal rules formed way back

It is time for moon to enter main track.

Sun dipped into ocean to hide his glory

Horrified ocean moved violently upward

Started crying and yelling to hold moon

It may take away my last breath very soon

Hosts of ghosts of darkness entered streets

Gangsters finalized their mid night meets

Uncovering that side of life with filthy sheets

Realized this atmosphere, for me, never suits

Can’t escape, need to do some thing

Running away yields nothing

Fear can be dealt nicely only with love

Just falling in love with the ocean of fear

Feeling darkness is also my lovely dear

With wide open hands and view very clear

Jumped from the hill of name and fame

Falling in love with a Ocean of Fear

Develops strength to hug all as near and dear

Sneha

Tags: love, fear

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LovelyStars said:
Sazzy dear,

Never feel uncomfortable while commenting, especially in my blogs.
This is the place where we can encourage and also help to improve our literary skills.

You can play with words...I observed it several times. I am just a beginner, have to learn and improve a lot.
What you suggested was simply superb.

Keep in touch dear.
Sneha

March 17, '08

sazzyme said:
luvd the approach whereby the poet gradually alleviates the fear of darkness. wonderful medley of words as well thoughts.

hey might i suggest this line for the fifth stanza,last line? no offence alright, sneha..

'Buoyantly this ambience me never greets'.
just as meets and sheets go well, streets and greets might..

March 17, '08

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