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Posted on: Mar 17, '08

A Woman with Wings!

My journey started as a puppet in your home

You taught me that serving all is divine act

But never came forward to serve at least some

If some thing goes wrong, you know how to react.

Your wild behavior frightens me a lot

You announce it as teaching me the good

But I feel you are screwing me in a slot

Dictating what I shouldn’t and what I should.

I am just like your shirt hanging on a wall

If you like wear it to parties and show it to all

Otherwise throw it to the corner of the room

You never gave importance more than a broom

Always gave examples of Sita and Mother Therisa

Told me I should have that much patience

What I got for my endless services to u and all?

You all simply praised me as Devi, a Goddess.

But never asked me what I like and what I don’t

I should like what you like

I should dance according to your tunes

I am also a human being just like you

I too have several desires to fulfill

How long I can stay like a slave?

If necessary I too can act brave

But you never give me any chance

Wife should not talk in front of man

You show puranas to prove your view

As an educated I know the world as much as you.

I Can handle things may be better than you

You tested my patience to the extreme level

Still following your rules is an insult to the womanhood

Hence moving apart from you and your grip

I have wings to fly to the world of freedom

I am the queen of my own created kingdom

I can sing, I can dance, and I can clap, no boredom

I can show to the entire world my wisdom

Now my services reach the people in need

Their blessings make me worthy for living

I can tune my life adjusting all strings

Then people call me a woman with wings

Sneha

Tags: love, freedom, life

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LovelyStars said:
Dear Harsh...male-female relationships are very sensitive. Lot of balancing from both sides is required. If one always wishes to rule the other and never think of the other as an equal, the other automatically looses interest and turns out to make wings to grow to fly away.

Thanks for the appreciation.
Sneha

March 20, '08

LovelyStars said:
Dear Sazzy,

FIVE STARS...WOW I AM FEELING GREAT.
Thank you very much dear.
That is the poem representing the inner heart of a woman who was fed up with cruel mentality of her man.

Keep in touch dear.
Sneha

March 20, '08

harsh7901 said:
moving apart n growing wings the solution??... why not a middle path... no one is perfect nor one should try to be one nor one should expect the other to be one...
enjoyed it... thanks..

March 19, '08

sazzyme said:
break outta the mould..i luvd this one totally..
darn good sneha ji..

fiver stars!

March 18, '08

LovelyStars said:
Dear Shomeonly,
Thanks for the visit. Thats a wonderful observation and it is impossible for any one, even the men who encouraged them, to stop growing of the wings of a woman.
Sneha

March 18, '08

LovelyStars said:
Hahhaha...harry8899LE0...enjoyed your comment.
After all woman gets pleasure when hero becomes helpless...hahahaha<br /> Have a nice day.
Sneha

March 18, '08

harry8899LEO said:
WOOMAN WITH WINGA=without wings itani taklif to with wings uff !!!!no way HAVE A NICE DAY.

March 17, '08

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