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Posted on: Mar 25, '08


 The Soul

You'd ask me if I want ur touch to linger on me...
Yes, You read my mind, do I wonder in glee!

C'mon carry me in ur arms and make me sway, 
Steal me away while the world watches in dismay.

I want ur quivering lips to go red and ur eyes wide with passion,
Whatever happens now, bad or worse, nothing will cause regression. 

Hold me tighter, for I don't want to go,
Let the 'worlds' know, let the trumpet blow.

My being burned centuries ago and my soul all dislodged,
I was wandering with thirst, with my desires of u within me locked.

Who was there while I pined and moaned and yearned,
It's only You my love who has, my trust, my love and my soul earned.

Now u are here,tired and ecstatic, for u've conquered fate,
Where are we...a threshold of another world or is it heaven's gate!


                            



Tags: soul, love, poem, poetry




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IN_MY_BOX said:
Now u are here,tired and ecstatic, for u've conquered fate,
Where are we...a threshold of another world or is it heaven's gate!
Very good,
we all belive that our soul is still around ,after we are dead, But the we all crave Imortality,
Or is it the after life which could be in the form of heaven,

July 17, '08


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khushidey said:
Aaaaaawwessomme!!
the sketch is beautiful!!

June 19, '08


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InkTank said:
ur thoughts have loads of sensitivity, passion, and power! they are capable enuff to permeate my senses, this is passion unleashed, and unabridged! OMG, u write such loving n mellifluous poetry, glad i came to ur earlier posts....after seeing in ur profile that u love to write poetry. i cu never put two nice verses together, so always am in awe of a classy poet, and u r one sure. i wont hope u write more, i will begggg u to write more please..........am a fan of ur verses:)

June 18, '08


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Bluesole2001 said:
it was simply good is it really from ur mind!! if it is keep it up

May 10, '08


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mohRomance said:
nice and good

April 21, '08


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babu7509 said:
there must be difference between madness and ecstacy .mind not. be happy

April 12, '08


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chalia143love said:
very nice & luvly ,
emotioned just truly ...

April 03, '08


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edifirescorpio said:
really sunshine,iam really shaken with the intimate and romantic feeling that arouses while reading this poem ,bravo,really ten out of ten for the soul of poem,,,this poem has really made me think to meet u one day,,to have ur autograph on a book published with ur writings

March 29, '08


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BrainyBakra said:
simply Beautiful, Gudiya!

March 29, '08


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SUBHAARTI said:
IT REALLY AS IT'S TITLE.VERRY VERRY NICE CREATIVITY.IS IT YOUR OWN ?

March 28, '08

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