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Posted on: May 06, '08


 " Innsaan"

  
JO nahi tha .....!
Zindgi bhar,...
vahi banane ki koshish karta raha 'main'.!

Aur jo tha 
'sahaj -saamanya' ..,
vah bane rahne ko 
mera man kabhi nahi maana.

Ek ziuddi bachche ki tarah
'Chaand' mangta raha main
Apne Aangan me taangne ke liye,
jabki 
mera Aangan to'
usi duniya ke Aangan ka ek 'tukda' tha,...
Jaha tanga  tha Chaand,..
Aasman me 
pidhi dar pidhi se,

'Quitabo' ke dher me 'doob' kar,
maine padha... ki,
'Insaan' hi 'bhagwan' hai,
Kyoki 'bhagwan' ki shakal bhi,
Insaan ki tarah banai
 Iss  duniya walon  ne,
use poojne ke liye,

'Insaan'  
agar chahe to ,..
kar sakta hai 'chhed'  Aasman me ,
'Ubbal' sakta hai 'samudra',
Apni 'saanso' se ,
'Naap' sakta hai 'byom', 
teen dug me,....

Lakin insaan ka yah 'roop',
'Ek bachan' hai ki 'bahu bachan',
yah nahi likha tha 
Quitabo me,

Jab maine jana ki ,
Insaan ek 'shaksha' ka naam nahi,
Vah to 'nirantar bahti' 
kisi  'dhara' ka naam hai,
'Dhara.'.....
jo khapti hai ,
Apne kinaron par  bani 'Chattano 'me ,
Hazaro Hazar Saal Ghiste hue,
samaya ke' katthor balshali' hantho me,
Ek 'jeevan Rekha' Khodne ke liye.....,

Aur 'jeevan rekha',..
Ek 'bindu' to hoti nahi,
vah to hoti hai Umra ka ek 'dastavez',
jise likhne me, 
'Itihass' ke kai  page 
 badal kar peele ho jate hai..,

Tou...,
'tatola' khud ko,

'Gili mitti' ki tarah
jo kuchh tha 
usase 'badla' nahi tha main

'Bdha' nahi to 'ghata' bhi nahi tha main

kisi bhi raaqstey  par 'zhando' ki tarah lahra kar ,
chala hi nahi tha main,

kisi bhi 'roop' me'dhala' hi nahi tha main

'Aag' me rahkar bhi 
'jala' hi nahi tha 'main'.....,

'Gool ghere' me 
Pragati ke naam par  
kolhu ke  bail ki tarah 
chala hi nahi tha 'main'....,,

'Yugo- yugon' se vaisa hi tha 
'shaswat roop' me,

bahut badi 'baat' thi ki 
'zinda' tha,
'mara' nahi tha 'main'......!
 










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whirlwind2000 said:
SAURABH JI !!AAPKI KAVITA SAHI MAYNE MEN AANKHEN KHOLNE WALI HAIN ! HUM LOG BHAGWAN KE PEECHE BHAGTE HAIN AUR APNE ANDAR JO BHAGWAN HAI USE NAKAR DETE HAIN !! BAHOT HI BARA SANDESH HAI !! AAP AUR BHI AISI HI KAVITAIN LIKHEN !!

June 04, '08


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creativefront said:
Aatmvishvas se bhari huee aapki yah kavita vastava mein sarahneey hai. Lambi kavita hone ke baavazood aapne siddha haathon se kavita ka bhalee prakar nirvaah kiyaa hai. Aapko achchhee kavita ke liye badhaee.

"'Insaan'
agar chahe to ,..
kar sakta hai 'chhed' Aasman me ,
'Ubbal' sakta hai 'samudra',
Apni 'saanso' se ,
'Naap' sakta hai 'byom',
teen dug me,...."

Isko padhkar mujhe barbas Mahaan gazalkaar Dushayant Kumar ka Dhansoo sher yaad Aagayaa:-
"Kaun kahta hai Aasmaan mein chhed naheen ho sakataa,
Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaaro."

Aapkee is kavita ke liye aapko punah mubaarakvaad.

- C.M.Upadhyay "Shoonya AAkaankshi"

May 13, '08


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jay_metal said:
excellent-jho nahi tha vahi banne ka koshih"

May 06, '08

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