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whirlwind2000 said: SAURABH JI !!AAPKI KAVITA SAHI MAYNE MEN AANKHEN KHOLNE WALI HAIN ! HUM LOG BHAGWAN KE PEECHE BHAGTE HAIN AUR APNE ANDAR JO BHAGWAN HAI USE NAKAR DETE HAIN !! BAHOT HI BARA SANDESH HAI !! AAP AUR BHI AISI HI KAVITAIN LIKHEN !! June 04, '08 |
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creativefront said: Aatmvishvas se bhari huee aapki yah kavita vastava mein sarahneey hai. Lambi kavita hone ke baavazood aapne siddha haathon se kavita ka bhalee prakar nirvaah kiyaa hai. Aapko achchhee kavita ke liye badhaee. "'Insaan' agar chahe to ,.. kar sakta hai 'chhed' Aasman me , 'Ubbal' sakta hai 'samudra', Apni 'saanso' se , 'Naap' sakta hai 'byom', teen dug me,...." Isko padhkar mujhe barbas Mahaan gazalkaar Dushayant Kumar ka Dhansoo sher yaad Aagayaa:- "Kaun kahta hai Aasmaan mein chhed naheen ho sakataa, Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaaro." Aapkee is kavita ke liye aapko punah mubaarakvaad. - C.M.Upadhyay "Shoonya AAkaankshi" May 13, '08 |
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jay_metal said: excellent-jho nahi tha vahi banne ka koshih" May 06, '08 |
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