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Posted on: May 12, '08

An authentic statement

Hello everybody ! Here is a poem by me. I would like you to read. Now get ready.....

Deposition

Our meeting was unexpected

She looked so pretty
in the twilight of falling dusk by the riverside

I thought of asking her name
what else I could ask

But before I enquired
we were brought closer by the sound of the winds
coming through the reeds

I gasped for breath
and to my utter surprise
I found her so kind and pleasant

Thanks to the load-shedding,
that so easily she could rub a breast
of spirits on my lips

The surrounding was enthused by drizzles
that too on the bank of the river

I forgot to walk back home

But alas ! My poem, at that time, was censored
by the engulfing darkness

The river, shooting my pride, remained as witness
to what happened that evening.

So dear fropperites ! Here ends my poem.

What Do you think about it ?

A love poem ? About the eternal man-woman relationship ?

Probably you have rejoiced to have a fellow fropperite writting on this topic.

But, hold your breath, this may not be a love poem !

Of course, you can interpret any poem according to your taste, and aptitude. But it is equally true that the poet's intention might be a different one.

So, give me your comments.

And I will divulge my thoughts behind this humble (may be deceptive) creation.

Wait for my next blog in a couple of days.

Tags: love, nature, poem, relationship

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tito2008 said:
Yes, it is not a love poem in the conventional sense. But there is love galore ! And you are right Sazzy, when you thought nature, a la the setting sun among others, behind it.

May 14, '08

tito2008 said:
You are right, Sazzy. Imagination meets poetry. Individuality is not all and only one.

May 14, '08

tito2008 said:
I read your wonderful blog, Sneha. I expect you to read my next blog.

May 14, '08

sazzyme said:
this aint a luv poem u say? hmmmm u talking bout the setting sun then? ya care to reveal at the end of all the comments..wht u were really thinking bout? only if u feel ok to do so.

May 12, '08

sazzyme said:
guess after all ..theresnt much in a name..or ..is there? nywyas u never got to get her name eh?

luvd the poem..conjures up wonderful imagination in my head. :D
guess,sometimes just the 'meeting of minds' is all that matters..nuthing else, absolutely nuthing else...

wonder what happend that eve

five stars,but only three showing up :(

May 12, '08

LovelyStars said:
Waiting for your next blog.
I invite you to read my blog with the title "Kiss of an Angel" which was published here long time back.

Sneha

May 12, '08

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