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Posted on: May 19, '08

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I ought to have told you to
take care of your things

Look what you did
You have left your smiling lips on my eyes
Memories of your caring words are in my heart

Do you think I am going to return them
‘Nope’, prompt comes the answer
through your fingers

The web has entangled us for none of our
faults, the long arduous wait
for our wishes to chat
comes a cropper

I set a clock of hours to remind me
about your sweet
dreams of the dreaming world
The clock has no arrow of minutes
Yet its passage through hours is so fast

Did I see you once smiling at me
from the shadows of a tree full of green leaves
I could smell tea
in the night wind
You said to me a happy day was about to begin

The sun is to the west of you
The sun is to the east of me

The east meets the west
on the web
it is either daybreak or nightfall

Come on, let’s turn orange
like the sun
As I am getting ready to carry the fragrance of
your hairs, blonde like ripe paddy,
to my granary

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tito2008 said:
wow chithra ! you made me feel upbeat...

May 28, '08

chithrajust said:
the world wide web transcends the boundaries of the humdrum world;
and whoever said it's a virtual world; it's the real one buddy! and you said it!!!

May 28, '08

tito2008 said:
thanks sumedha ! you have read the poet's mind so well...

May 27, '08

tenjade_destiny said:
very nice..so emotional yet so realistic, most of us do cherish such kind of virtual relationships these days..i feel u have depicted everyone's feelings so well whoever has been sharing such kind of intimacy in his/her life. the hearts do get entwined and minds entangled, i loved specially the last lines "As I am getting....my granary".superb

May 26, '08

tito2008 said:
this time you need not worry 'bout the content of the poem...as it is a directly told story of entwining of hearts...

the clock has lost the meaning of minutes...'coz the two characters often go on talking for hours...it is a metaphor of lost time between hours.

May 21, '08

sazzyme said:
jeez! thats beautiful alright. but i am worried - what if i take it at the first outright thought that comes to me-that tis bout a gal and an entwining of hearts and u come and poke a hole into my theory with ur 'poet's liberty' and say tis bout the transmitting of subatomic particles thru the airwaves??!!

luvd it when u say-the clock has no arrow of minutes. what is it? allegory,metaphor? similie?

May 20, '08

tito2008 said:
thank you soha...i read your blog about online relationship and left a comment there.

May 19, '08

soha4794 said:
this is very very nice............
i just loved it

May 19, '08

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