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tenjade_destiny said: nice srian....the emotions ranging from appreciation to wicked thoughts captured so beautifully May 25, '08 |
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TiwariMinan said: I Like It, Very Intresting & Impressive, Well Written. Cheers ! Warm Regards Minan. May 23, '08 |
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ASYLUM said: oh okay. I think 'a break took' distracted me! May 22, '08 |
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sriangood said: I am talking about every day events at bus stops, mall, anywhere... A good looking female invites this type of male reaction. While most enjoy the view for a few moments and move on, it also initiates a lot of trouble specially with a lot of mentally unhealthy people in our society. May 22, '08 |
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ashokthakur said: nice verse May 22, '08 |
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ASYLUM said: Are you talking about the television? Glamour, serials and the news..in that order? But i am not judging this at all, i just felt it was about that media. :D May 22, '08 |
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sriangood said: I promised that I will take up some thing lighter and more entertaining. I do not know if my endeavour has succeeded. Some darker thoughts have crept in. Anyway, it is for you to judge.....and your judgement is quite apparent by the comments. Finally, Main aisaa hi hoon. May 22, '08 |
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creativefront said: Nice piece of rhyme. You have tried to make it beautiful & attractive e.g. : "Passion whirls twirl, desires afire Where who, who where look look". Thanks sriangood for making a beautiful creation & thanks Chandra Shekhar for sharing it. May 21, '08 |
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sazzyme said: rofl at the first two stanzas and grave thoughts at the last one. so few words and yet u convey a wholesome 'plague' thats affected our society. any form of 'eye candy' will be mercilessly gawked at. good one dude.. May 20, '08 |
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geetsudha said: this is as funny as was said for men by a woman. but in both cases one has to go deeper to know the real stuff. May 20, '08 |
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