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Posted on: May 20, '08

AJANBI [STRANGER]

AJNABI ,tum jo lagte thhe pahchaane se

Kya ho gaya kyuoo ho gaye anjaane se?

Yaad karo un muskurahto ko

Aati thhi jo tere aa jaane se.

Khilkhilahto ko toh hum kho hi chuke

Muskurahte toh hamari mat chheeno;

Kahi aisa na ho yado ki hichkiya,le jaaye saanso ke is khajane
ko.

Yaad aati hai beeti hui kuchh baaten
"waqt ne di thhee kuchh
khamosh si aahtne

Kah rahaa thha woh de kar dastak ,na aaungaa ab tere dar tak.

Aansoo aankho ke tere mai ban na paoonga,

Chalaa jata hun mai ab nahi mai aaunga.

Tabhi roka thha humne usko;

Thhaam ke haath kahaa thhaa "unko",

Rukna padega tujhe sadaa ke liye;

Warna saanse meri ruk jaayengi.

Shayad ruk bhi jaayne suiynaa tujhe qaid karne ko!

Par ud jaayengi meri saanse talashne ko tujhe

Phir tu palat ke ayaa bhi par hame na yahnaa payega.

Na tu payega hame na hum hi tujhe payenge ,

Tab ,woh aansoo meri aankho mne toone jo rokna chahaa

Tarsega tu wahi aansoo ban ke aane ko

Ruk jaa abhi ; na chhod saath ko

"Khuda" bhi toh yahi kahtaa hai

Chalaa jataa hai waqt Phir na laut 'sakne' ko.

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hans300 said:
"AJNABI,tum jo lagte the pahchane se" .....wahooooo .....kya baat hai rakhi,aap ne ek baar phir dil bagh bagh kar diya .kitna dard hai kisi ke kisi se bichudne mein yeh mehsoos ho raha is ko padh ker .....bahut hi sunder rachna hai yeh.thanx. once again.

March 08, '09

rollercoaster2001 said:
ajnabi ki kashish aur meri majboori.....sunder shabd hai aur bhav bhi!!

October 10, '08

busybridge said:
"Dhoop me niklo ,Ghataon me nahakar dekho,

Jindgi kya hai , kitabon ko hatakar dekho,

Fasla nazron ka dhokha bhi ho sakta hai,

Woh mile ya na mile , hath barha kar dekho,"

Bahut masoomumiat se likhi gai ek masoom si kavita,( Sirf tareef se coorelate karen)

Thanks for sharing.

August 18, '08

oliveintl said:
Ajnabee .... ajnabee nahi raha, tho anjaan kab tak rahega??????!!!!!!

June 06, '08

madhumitaCAP2000 said:
boyblue1983
thankyou for those lovely comments .

Mr creativefront,
Thanks for reading and appreciating my work

June 06, '08

creativefront said:
"Kahi aisa na ho yado ki hichkiya,le jaaye saanso ke is khajane ko."

Aapane Srangaar ke virah paksh ka ati sundar varnan kiya hai. Poori kavita hriday veena ke taron ko jhankrat karati hai, jismein se nikale peeda ke swar samast vaataavaran ko bhaav vhival kar dete hein. Kavita ke bhaav ati sundar hein :

"Phir tu palat ke ayaa bhi par hame na yahnaa payega.
Na tu payega hame na hum hi tujhe payenge ,
Tab ,woh aansoo meri aankho mne toone jo rokna chahaa
Tarsega tu wahi aansoo ban ke aane ko".

Thanks for sharing Rakhi ji.

June 06, '08

boy_blue1983 said:
waise to main apne frnds ke blog padhta hun lekin in dino thoda busy hun isliye nhi padh raha tha, lekin acha kiya jo apne mujhe apna blog padhne ke liye kaha...aur mujhe itni achi potry padhne ko mili.its really beautyful.thanks for sharing.keep smilin!!

June 04, '08

Sjfrogger said:
Doston se bhi kya yeh ajnabee pan! Waqt ko kaun rok sakaa hai.

Dill thaam kar baitheeye, shayad woh aa jaaye,
ya phir koi majboori ho, yeh kaun jaane

May 29, '08

madhumitaCAP2000 said:
ME _MEETA CAP

ITNE SUNDER SHABDO MNE AAPNE MERI IS KAVITA KI PRASHANSA KEE HAI KI MAIN KHUD HAIRAN HNOO.IS PROTSAHAN KE LIYE DHANYAVAD ASHA KARTI HNOO AAP AAGE BHI MERI KAVITAO MNE APNI DILCHUSPI RAKHENGI '
AAPKO MERI SHUBHKAMNAY

May 28, '08

govil2001 said:
thanks its beautiful post

May 25, '08

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