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Posted on: May 20, '08

GAZAL

                Shabd

Kabhee shahad se meethe shabd.
Kabhee neem   se  kadve   shabd.

Jharein Phool ki pankhuriyon se,
Kabhee lagein patthar  se shabd.

Kachche pay ke jhaag  sareekhe,
Tapt   tave   kee   bundein shabd.

Kuchha padaav ko manzil kahakar,
andhiyaare     bhatkaate     shabd.

Sapane banakar kabhee suhaane,
Chale   bedharak aate    shabd.

Lutate vraddh, auratein, bachche,
Jab lutate    pit    jate    shabd.

Kabhee kaanpate    patte     jaise,
Sarpat  kabhee  bhaagate  shabd.

Jaise nadi mein  ushmaa  ghulati,
Prem   se   urjaa    paate    shabd.

Sukhe khet  takein  baadal   jyon,
Bhaav  sukhee  mil  jaate  shabd.

Safal 'Shoonya' yadi aara banakar,
Sannaate     ko      kaate    shabd.

- C.M.Upadhyay "Shoonya Akankshee"

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Sunshine_Is_Here said:
aapke shabd bhi aapke hriday ki tarah paak-saaf hai Sir...am honoured that u shared ur work with me.

June 04, '08

BrainyBakra said:
Beautiful poem, Sir!
So nice !!

June 03, '08

creativefront said:
Thanks Subodh 'IntellectualBoy'& 'beatofsoul' for appreciations.

"Kabhi madhur hokar bhi 'Mitroan',
hridey naa chhu payein 'SHABD'.
Kabhi kadave hokar bhi 'Meetaa',
Marham saa sahalayein 'SHABD'"
Wah! Wah! Meeta ji 'Me_MeetaCAP' kyaa khoob likh rahee hein aap. Meri gazal kee isase sundar, isase adhik saargarbhit tippanee mere vichaar se koee ho hee naheen sakatee. Aajakal aapakee kalam se kavitaa ke bol ek lay mein nikal rahe hein. Aapake ooper saraswatee kee aseem kripaa hai. Keep it up my friend. God bless you.

June 01, '08

Me_MeetaCAP said:
Maninia 'Mitr'...Kuch panktian en natkhat 'SHABDON' par. Asha karti huan, swekarye hongi....

Kabhi madhur ras bankar tapakain,
antar mein gharaayein 'SHABD'.

Kabhi garam seese se pighalein,
Kanon mein bhar jayein 'SHABD'.

Kabhi madhur hokar bhi 'Mitroan',
hridey naa chhu payein 'SHABD'.

Kabhi kadave hokar bhi 'Meetaa',
Marham saa sahalayein 'SHABD'

June 01, '08

beatofsoul said:
hmmm...kiya Shabd hain!! very nice!!

May 27, '08

IntellectualBoy said:
HI..SIR..

WELL DONE...

POETRY IS GOD GIFTED VIRTUE..

POEM IS VERY BRILLIANT...

KEEP IT UP...

THANKS FOR SHARING..

May 25, '08

creativefront said:
"koi ghadi aisi bhi aye ,milen nahin kho jayen shabd,
koi kisi men aise doobe,'kaise',bata na payen shabd,
tan ko man ko shital kar de,aisa ras barsayen shabd,"
Wah!Wah! Kya kavyamaya comment kiyaa hai. Dhanyavaad mitra 'busybridge'.

Sahi farmaayaa hai Ritu ji(Ritufirst) aapane. Devanaagaree lipi kee baat hee alag hai. Aapane gazal kee tareef mein jo shabd uchcharit kiye hein, unakee prashanshaa ke liye mere paas shabd naheen hein, sivaay is Dhanyavaad ke.

Wah Rajeev(creativityinlife) aaj to is comment kee duniyaa mein tum bhee aa gaye. Mujhe isakee kitanee khushee ho rahee hai, yah mein bataa naheen sakataa. Tumako gazal pasand aayee, bahut-bahut dhanyavaad.

May 24, '08

creativityinlife said:
EK SHBD MERI JINDGI KA AKELA SA PADA THA.KISI KE ANE KA KISI KE SUNNE KA USE INTJAR THA. LEKIN YE INTJAR USKA KBI PURA NA HUA. KYOKI WO SHBD TO MERI JINDGI KI AKHRI SANS KI JINDGI THA.

May 23, '08

creativityinlife said:
dear bhaiya,aaj kafi dino ke bad is site pr aya hu. kuch karno se ni aa pa rha tha. jindgi agar kisi shbd ki bhanti hoti to hr ek vyakti uski gahrai me doob ke sare lag lapet se dur ho jata or jiven ki asliyt ke sath bina chal kapat ke ji jata.kyoki hr shbd ek aasma, ek aasra , ek falsafa lie hota he. wakai shbdo ki gahrai ko janna aasma pa lene jaisa hota he. or hr shbd ki gahrai me dub jana hr ek ke bus ki bt nai. I LIKE THIS POEM VERRRRRRRRY MUCH.

May 23, '08

Ritufirst said:
dear c. m. jeeee.....aapki 'shabd' kavita dil ko chu gayi.kash likhai agar HINDI hoti to padhne me aur maza aata. SHABD AGAR GUNGE HOTE to unhe padhana ya samazana ham jaisonke bas ki bat nahi hoti. U have dt majic power. G8 CREATION. CONGRATES!.... KEEP IT UP . LOVE RITU

May 23, '08

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