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Storm39 said: Lovely! nice post. Mohabbat ko mohabbat ka ishara yaad rahta hai, har pyar ko apna pyar yaad rahta hai, do paal jo unki baho mein guzare ho maut tak wo nazara yaad rahta hai.. August 10, '08 |
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Storm39 said: Lovely! nice post. Mohabbat ko mohabbat ka ishara yaad rahta hai, har pyar ko apna pyar yaad rahta hai, do paal jo unki baho mein guzare ho maut tak wo nazara yaad rahta hai. August 10, '08 |
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saurabh55a said: aapki kavita bilkul aisi hi hai ki- "Khushiyon kee kankariyan jaise Fenkee mastee kee nadiyaa mein " very nice poem "--AAnkho me jab aap rah rahe , to aansu ki jagah kahan..? June 17, '08 |
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dranilguptakota1310 said: good as you are with sweet emotions, better you are with the feelings narrations, words you choose that are real devotions, comments that you get are the standard notions. Congrats once again, anil June 16, '08 |
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creativefront said: Thanks Pushplata ji 'Latav2063', Rajeev 'creativityinlife' Mariyam ji 'beatofsoul' for your appreciations. Thanks Sun shine ji for you beautiful comments on my geet. It will give me positive incitement to write better. Suhani ji 'CHILMN_G' mere lekhan par aapakee tippanee hameshaa kee tarah saargarbhit, pyaar bharee aur khubasurat hai. Isake liye aapakaa bahut-bahut dhanyavaad. Sir Sawhney saa'b 'earmarkedfortrouble Priya Varun 'Veer01' mujhe khushee hai ki tumane mere geet ko sanjeedgee ke saath padhaa hai, Naheen to tumharee umra ke bachhe har cheese ko fauree taur par hee lete hein. Geet ko samajhane aur sundar tippanee dene ke liye dhanyavaad. Raakhi ji 'madhumitaCAP2000' Aapki manhaaree tippanee se main abhibhoot hoon aur hriday se dhanyavaad gyaapit karataa hoon. June 06, '08 |
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madhumitaCAP2000 said: itnee sunder kavita ke liye shukriya its fabulous chuppee ki deewar todkar dard ret sa chhitaraya hai its great June 05, '08 |
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Veer01 said: Helo C.M.Ji, Kiase Ho, Aapka Hindi Geet late se dekha, Lakin Aapne 18 saal ki umar main hi itna sundar likhna shuru kardia mujhe bhut hi accha laga khaskar is geet ki kuchh line ne mann ko prasan kar diya thanks for send me. " Nayan dwaar se dil mein ghusakar Chheen liyaa kyon saraa khajana Choree - choree aaye lekin Chupake-Chupake ab mat jaana aurChuppee kee deevaar todakar Dard ret saa chhitaraayaa hai Naagfanee ke kaante jaisaa Sambhavatah kuchha ug aayaa hai" itna Sundar varanan kiya hai jo ki mann bha gaya... June 01, '08 |
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creativefront said: Thanks Tiwari ji(TiwariMinan) for encouraging comments. Keep on blessings. Margarita ji(daisyann26) thanks to you too for silent comment. Sumedha ji(tenjade_destiny) really you are too genious to catch the feelings & meanings of poetry. You have understood the said geet very nicely & deeply. you have not only caught the lines "Agar bichhudanaa ho to guinya Hargij mere paas na aao" but beautifully expressed it. Thanks too much buddy. 'Anamica18' ji sundar tippanee ke liye dhanyavaad. Chandra Shekhar ji(notjustart) your suggession is very good & admissible too. You are also one of the critics on fropper to whom I regard. Thanks for understanding my geet seriously. Thanks Harsh(harsh7901) for your meeningful commenting expressions. Wah! Wah!'busybridge' ji kyaa romantic tippani kee hai aapane mere geet par. jinake liye bahaaee ras kee Gangaa mujhe kyaa milegaa aaj unhein badanaam kar. Aapake ras bhare comment ke liye hriday se dhanyavaad. May 30, '08 |
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creativefront said: Sharad ji(sharadtailang) Aapako geet achchha lagaa, yah baat mere liye kaafee mahatva kee hai. Aapakee sameeksha hameshaa hee upayogee hotee hai. Aapakee jaankaaree ke liye bataa doon ki yah geet 'Tum hi tum rahatee sapanon mein' se shuroo naheen hotaa hai. Yah to geet kaa sheershak hai.Haan saaraa khajaanaa kee jagah sabhi khajanaa karane se maatraayein jaroor baraabar ho jaatee hein, par 'khajanaa' se pahale yaa to 'saaraa' upayukta hai yaa fir 'sab'. Sabhee khajaanaa theek naheen lagataa. Fir bhee chunki aapakee salaah hai to is par gambheerataa se vichaar kar kisee nateeje par pahunchane kaa prayaas karoonga. Aapakee bahumoolya pratikriyaa ka dhanyavaad. Chitra ji(Chitrajlp) aapane punah mere blog par aakar meree kavitaa padh jo sukhad tippanee kee, usase mein bahut gauravanvit hoon.Dhanyavaad. Goodwill2001 your saying 'Nice' is gift to me.Thanks friend. sazzyme it gives me great pleasure to see you twice on blog, not only to read the poem but commenting twice.Thnx friend. May 28, '08 |
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CHILMN_G said: bahut khooob ... pata hai tumhe kabhi kabhar kuch kuch alfaz dil ko chhujate hai ... "Kyon na neend bhaayegee man ko Tum hee tum rahatee sapanon mein." is baat se mujhe meri Dushwi bahut yaad aati hai ... i love him and i love u also i hope k aaj ki raat phir se un ki yaado me guzar jaye yuhi sapne bhi mehek jaye ..thanx 4 sharing ma dost .... May 28, '08 |
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