Posted on: Jun 04, '08
A SMALL KINGDOM ON THE EAST COAST OF INDIA.. MOVIE STORYLINE
DEAR FROPPIES,
PLZ READ THIS STORY AND SUGGEST SOME TWISTS AND TURNS TO IT AND A DIFFERENT ENDING TOO..!! I have already suggested two endings.. tell me which one u liked best.
I EXPECT U GUYS TO GET REALLY CREATIVE WITH THE THOUGHTS...GRRRRIINNN..!!
I KNOW ITS A LONG ONE.. BUT READ ON, READ ON... PLZZZZZZ??
A small kingdom on the East coast of India ( ABC ), Ruled by a strong, wise king named Rajarajaa. His wife is Manini…..about 28 yrs old. She is very sensuous and charming, with an innocent face and a shrewd mind. She controls all the courtiers in the kingdom with her limpid looks and body language which promises men their wildest dreams. Everybody thinks she is sweet and innocent, but actually she has an agenda….
Rajarajaa loves her, but is not able to satisfy his wife (he may be old/ Gay?). Rajarajaas trusted lieutenant is a tall, strong, handsome man called Manoviraaj whom Manini is using, to learn state secrets. The King’s younger brother Baali, who hates the King, is trying to take over the Kingdom by any means.
Into this mix comes a tall, handsome and blonde stranger out of the blue…. He is injured and delirious and is found in the jungle by Manoviraaj. His name is Adriaan and he cannot speak their language. His only focus is to get well soon, and get back to his own people. He is looked at with suspicion by the king, but treated as a guest. Handmaidens take care of his every need and also keep a close eye on him for the King. Adriaan comes from a culture much advanced; many gadgets and implements unknown to the people of ABC are found near him, so Baali is interested in him. Baali’s trusted spy Priyamvada, is a handmaiden in charge of Adriaan’s wellbeing.
Baali is in cahoots with the King of the neighbouring kingdom of XYZ trying to cut a deal with him to oust Rajarajaa and make Baali King, in return for part of the lands.
Adriaan meets Manini one day in the walled palace garden, and ignores her totally as his only thoughts are about getting back to his own land. Manini is infuriated by this as her ego is hurt and she decides to seduce him. Adriaan is completely oblivious to her and just concentrates on getting well again. He is of course being seduced by Priyamvada, as she tries to get information from him (while Manini watches from a hidden alcove?), and he satisfies his appetites. Manini tries all her wiles on him, with no response! Adriaan is irritated by Manini’s constant presence around him, as this hinders his plans to escape. They encounter each other on many stormy occasions, including once when he beats Manini at the game of Pat/Chess, which is her forte.
In the meantime Baali is working on Adriaan too with his sweet talk, trying to gauge how Adriaan can be of help to him in ousting the king. Baali realizes that Adrian knows about things such as gunpowder and weapons which can be of use to him. Baali also notices Manini’s wiles and efforts to attract Adriaan’s attention, and makes plans to use Manini to get his own ends.
The King of XYZ attacks the Kingdom of ABC, and Manoviraj is sent to the northern frontiers to defeat him. Baali has also been filling his brother Rajarajaa’s ears about Manoviraj’s infatuation with Manini.
Manoviraj is fighting wars for the King and is not aware of all the palace intrigue. The King has also been interacting with Adriaan and realizes that he is an intelligent, honourable and skilled warrior who could help him to run his kingdom. The King knows that Adriaan is only interested in getting back to his own people and thinks of ways to hold him back. One day the King takes Adriaan, all resplendent in royal robes, with him on his elephant. The people, who have never seen such a beautiful blonde man, remember the predictions of the soothsayer of the kingdom about a blonde god who will be their salvation. They begin to revere Adriaan as a god.
Now Manini is very angry that Adriaan is not responding to her. Her plan changes and she decides to use Adriaan instead of Manoviraj or Baali to become the chief ruler of the country. She uses all kinds of tricks from bathing seductively in front of Adriaan to trying to get the King to imprison him. But the king trusts Adriaan and he helps the King with many state matters.
Manoviraaj defeats the King of XYZ, comes back from the wars and notices his queen trying to attract the attention of Adriaan. He is very jealous and suspicious at the same time. Baali on the other hand is collecting all the information on Adriaan and Manini hoping that he can find some way of using it against the King. Manoviraj accuses Baali of giving information to the King of XYZ, but Rajarajaa does not want to hear a word against his own brother and imprisons Manoviraaj in the dungeons. Priyamvada, who secretly loves Manoviraj, meets him in the dungeons and gives him information about all the palace happenings.
By now Adriaan is totally irritated with Manini’s actions and decides to make love to her just to get her off his back. A beautiful, seductive, erotic love scene later Adriaan begins to be seduced by Manini’s charms. They are unaware that Priyamvada is reporting everything to Manoviraj. They try to meet again as they are attracted to each other. Manoviraaj is too jealous of Adriaan’s popularity with the people and the trust that the old king has in him. Baali is watching all this in glee planning on how to use it to his own advantage. Manoviraaj sends a message to the King through Priyamvada, about Manini’s affair with Adriaan… but the King turns a deaf ear to him as he is interested in getting Adriaan to sire an heir for his kingdom! An heir who is tall and blond and god like!
This makes Manoviraaj angry and restless and he also begins to feel helpless. In the meantime Manini and Adriaan are totally in lust. Adriaan is side tracked from his plan to return to his country. The King is happy and contented because he is sure of getting a god like heir for his kingdom. Adriaan is now attached to Manini and also helping the king with State matters and Security. Baali organizes a gang of thugs to kidnap Adriaan and have him killed. But Adriaan fights them all, captures their leader and learns that Baali is behind the attack, which knowledge he keeps to himself.
Ending no. 1:
Now Priyamvada discovers that she is pregnant with Adriaan’s child, and is about to tell Manoviraj this fact. But Manoviraj tells her a story………..
Manoviraj is actually the son of Veeravrat, the eldest brother of Rajarajaa and Baali. His mother was a foreigner, and the secret wife of Veeravrat. Veeravrat had died in a war when he was the crown prince, and Manoviraj was born after his father’s death. Soon after Manoviraaj’s birth his mother had died, and he had been raised by his mother’s trusted maid and her husband. Manoviraj had been raised on stories of his father’s valour, and how Rajarajaa had deceitfully arranged for Veeravrat to die. Therefore Manoviraaj felt that he was the true heir and that it was time for him to ascend the throne. Priyamvada sees an opportunity to become the queen. She agrees to help him to escape and kill Rajarajaa, who is not yet aware of Priyamvada’s double game, in return for being made the queen. Now Manoviraj takes Priyamvada’s help and escapes from the dungeons. He plots to kill the King and Adriaan, but is thwarted in his attempts by Manini, who loves Adriaan. Manoviraj still lusts after/ loves Manini and contemplates making her his queen instead of Priyamvada.
Priyamvada uses her ace, and informs Manoviraj that she is pregnant with Adriaan’s child. She tells him how the soothsayer had predicted that one day a blonde, god-like king will become the savior of the Kingdom. Manoviraj hides with Priyamvada , and she delivers a blonde, fair, blue eyed baby boy. Baali comes to know of the baby’s birth and over hears Manoviraaj’s adoptive parents discussing how he is actually the true heir.
Since all of Baali’s attempts have failed so far, he decides to support his nephew, Manoviraaj’s attempt to get the kingdom. In return, he asks that his life be spared and he be given a post as Chief Administrator of the country. Together they overthrow the King, and bring out the blonde baby and Priyamvada as proof that the Saviour is here! The people hail the baby as the new crown prince and Manoviraaj as their King. Adriaan runs away with Manini into the wild forest.
This leaves the story nicely open-ended for a Sequel.
Ending no. 2:
By now Adriaan has tasted the power of being adored by the people, and of running the country by proxy. He realizes that he can use Baali to his own ends and become the King very easily. He uses his special skills to help the people and gain their confidence. He comes to know from an informer that Manoviraaj is planning to take over the Kingdom with Priyamvada’s help. He offers to teach Baali his advanced techniques in making gunpowder etc, in return for his help to become the King.
Adriaan cuts a deal with Manoviraaj to help him to escape. As he escapes into the forest he is killed by Adriaan’s men, and his body, and a plan to kill the King, are presented to the King as proof of his duplicity. The King now trusts Adriaan completely.
Priyamvada realizes that her life is in jeopardy and goes to Adriaan with her blonde baby. Now Adriaan is perplexed… he is not a bad man so doesn’t want to harm the mother of his child. Since the child is blond and blue eyed and obviously Adriaan’s the King decides to have the child killed. He wants Manini’s baby to be blond and blue eyed so that he may become King one day.
But by now Adriaan is attached to the baby, and protects it fiercely. He realizes that in order for his son to survive, he will either have to go away with Priyamvada, or take over as King and banish the old King Rajaraja. With Baalis help and his own knowledge of weapons he overthrows the old King and takes over the Kingdom. He marries Manini and she becomes his Queen. Baali, who is treacherous, tries to use Adriaan’s own weapons against him, but is overpowered and destroyed.
Another open ending for a good Sequel.
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