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mahanavinGEM said: very nice !My best wishes to you. June 13, '08 |
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SahithyaDreamspace said: Thanks all. and meawoo, thanks for the advice. I'd tell what everything is about when J and her friends meet that evening. June 10, '08 |
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meawoo said: i think u have skill. but u r not researching enough. include more facts(gk) to make it believable and to draw the reader to that place. its too short to b exact. u need to name cities, roads, the type of diamond etc....i think u got. and i think u will make it too. sorry that i had to be a little negative. but good critics makes good talent. June 10, '08 |
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notjustart said: First and foremost, please brush aside that thought out from your mind. That if readers don't like what you've written, you must stop writing altogether. It would be unfair not only to you but to other newcomers who wish to write. So there! Now about the story. I read it twice but could not fathom what's happening. The prelude is also a bit confusing, why was it there? I would suggest you first write down the incidences like a skeleton, then you write the dialogues. If you read a story written by me called WISH (My second attempt!) may be you will get a fair idea about short story writing. Read the complete version please. June 10, '08 |
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jd132 said: hey u really got a great writing skills go ahead buddy really too good and waiting for the coming episodes ![]() ![]() June 10, '08 |
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sweetfammy said: good attempt June 09, '08 |
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MrStoryTeller said: Go ahead! June 09, '08 |
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