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Bharathselvan said: it is pregnant clouds! now edited. thanks for pointing out August 02, '08 |
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ravichd said: good poem but two questions:-1what is POWER CHARIOT? car! 2why did you write "pregnat clouds"  August 01, '08 |
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tenjade_destiny said: what a poem bharat, wonderful imagery....i am simply in awe...   August 01, '08 |
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Latav2063 said: I loved the imagery used here throughout the poem. It is like a burst of joy. July 31, '08 |
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earmarkedfortrouble said: From a Sci-Writer to writing 'poetry of zee SOUL' bee quite a transition.... N; U hath proved that U ken 'shift zee gear; as smooth as malai; from one 2 zee other'!!!!!    GGRRRRRIIINNNNNNN July 29, '08 |
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Bharathselvan said: also if i had been elsewhere other than on highway when it rained, my expressions would have been different depending on the situation i was in. July 25, '08 |
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Bharathselvan said: see i have added the words illusionary moments. our country is generally not known for neatness,cleanliness and punctuality. our-lifestyle nowadays is a copy of western style. While we dress the way the westerners wear, their positve traits are completely ignored. that only is implied here. and as for words people make aha!over poorly written wihtout any style supposed poems(!) here.anyway thanks for the comments. July 25, '08 |
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pankie28 said: u have unneccessary passion fr western world ..strange ...try to play with words..there is shortage of nice words chain in stanza...take this positive July 25, '08 |
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daisyann26 said: July 25, '08 |
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geetsudha said: wow,nature n reality both hv woven a butiful rainy poetry. July 24, '08 |
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