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coolsunil0404 said: nice September 02, '08 |
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tenjade_destiny said: awesome...the first couplet is really soul stirring..an absolute truth, we create differences and turn foes..otherwise there is no difference at all....beautiful indeed August 23, '08 |
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chinnak143 said: nice poet tip ........... thanks friend............. August 21, '08 |
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SONDHIYA said: JO KARTA HAI TUMSE PYAAR JO KARTA HAI TUMSE PYAAR VOHI DETA HAI TAKLIF HAZAAR USKE DIL ME HOTA HAI TUMHARI HAR BAAT KE LIYE IKRAAR KARO TUM CHAHE US SE KITNA BHI INKAAR LAGEGAA VO TUMHE PYAARA HAR BAAR ROOTH JAOGE TOH MANAYEGA VO HAR BAAT PAR TUMSE KAREGA TAKRAAR PAR EK BAAR US SE KEH KAR DEKHNA ZINDAGI BHAR KAREGA TUMHARA INTEZAAR TUMHARE HAR DUKH KO APNAKAR DEGA TUMHE KHUSHIYAAN HAZAAR KAREGA TUMHARI HIFAZAT KUCHH VAISE HI JAISE PHULON KI HIFAJAT KAANTE KARTE HAI HAR BAAR August 20, '08 |
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shareaffair said: kuch khaas laphzon ko baitha ke aas paas.shayar ne kaha logon mera dil hai bada udaas.jao kuch aur laphz le aao ab nahi raha jata inke paas. August 18, '08 |
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creativefront said: Apane andar na jhaankane kee baat kahatee huee yah gazal vaastava mein andar jhaankane ke liye prerit karati hai.Vartmaan mein jis prakaar log jeevan vyateet kar rahe hein, usake oopar bhee ek karaara vyanya karatee hai yah gazal. Sahee maane mein yah 'Darshan' se sambhandhit hai yah gazal. Aisee uchcha koti kee gazal prastut karane ke liye aur mujhe share karane ke liye bahut-bahut dhanyavaad.  August 14, '08 |
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SONDHIYA said: kya ye tera pehla pehla pyaar hai apna naam badal lo saayar ki gazal dream girl August 12, '08 |
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grade2000 said: hai mariyam hope you will be fine i like your ideas very much .thank you for this excellent message August 12, '08 |
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grade2000 said: insanni jajwaat ka mayana kya hota hai aaj aapka ontho se byana hhota hai August 12, '08 |
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Kloud_Bull said: simply awesome.......!!!  August 11, '08 |
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