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Posted on: Aug 09, '08

SNAIL TRACK

Wet weather, cloudy day, no sun ray
Notice a snail in garden that   day
Slowly moving with shell on back
Leaving behind long slippery track

Slimy moist body, shell load of ton
Even   if it want, snail    can't   run
Shell is its small comfortable home
Snail carry the same where it roam

Two pair of tentacles moving   around
Searching food it need, may be found
Touch tentacle with grass pluck beside
Simply pulls it self into shell inside

Leisurely moving   creep up a grass blade
No pause to look back, vanish into foliage
Looking at track, thought came into mind
Move on with own speed, never look behind

ashokthakur

Tags: wet, track, snail, dry

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sweeti-1983 said:

November 25, '08

sweeti-1983 said:
nice

November 23, '08

sanjaykhajuria said:
hi
nicely written piece
thanks for sharing
regards
sanjay

August 23, '08

Nazlini said:
nice

August 20, '08

infinite_happiness said:
hi...beautiful.thanks for sharing this.i feel if we see all around us,their is something teaching us all the time..its nature,animals,birds,seasons,etc...that are life's best teacher.

August 14, '08

palakmodi said:
nice.........

August 14, '08

CancerSA said:
Wonderfully described ... a lovely dedication! One just has to admore the patience, we humans can learn a lot from snails in that regard! Thanks for sharing!

August 14, '08

nasha24 said:
nice thx

August 13, '08

Pinkylala said:
Well expressed.

August 12, '08

NAKSHTRACAP said:
wonderful :

August 12, '08

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