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Posted on: Aug 11, '08


 "CHA hiye"

CHAhiye !

'Reel' jitni 
bhi lage par, 
'Film ' puri 
hona chahiye 
   Har kahani 
   ke 'andaz' me, 
   kuchh na kuchh 
   'duri' to hona chahiye !!

Vo bhi kya , 
koi log hai..? , 
'Parde' pe jo 
'Beparda ' hue ?
 AAsma ke 'taron' me
 unki na   ', 
  'Shumari'  chahiye !!

'shakhshiyat '
' vat- vrax ' si,ho.., ,
jinme 'havaen'
to 'thamen' ,
unche, unche , 
'chhah'  bin  ,
' kirdar ' na
'khajuri ' chahiye !!

' Likhne' wale ,
likhe kuchh,
vo 'bat' jo
'darde -aam' hai ,
' kalam' jo
'paiso' me 'biki,',
uski na
'be- nuri ' chahiye !!


- SOURABH

Chahiye "



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krishma2007 said:
nice

August 21, '08


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madhumitaCAP2000 said:
"kalam jo paiso me biki uski na-benuri chahiye"

jyada kuchh likh kar is kavita ki mahatta kam karna nahi chaahti
bahut hi achchi kavita hai

August 20, '08


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mediaperson2008 said:
Teekhe shabd Dhardaar hathiyaar ke manind wah wah

August 19, '08


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tenjade_destiny said:
soul searching quest, u have beautifully expressed in these words.....agree when you stress upon that element of life and a capacity to engulf one in every creation, without which every expression is merely display of words with no spirit to stir the souls..lovely poem saurabh

August 17, '08


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binduhu said:
wah..wah...
waise meri hindi kuch kamzor hai
punjaabi chalegi?
inna sona likha hai..ki gall hai!!


August 12, '08


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geetsudha said:
well written,well expressed,saurabh

August 11, '08


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whirlwind2000 said:
SARABH JI !

AAPNE AAJ KE SAMAY KA ACHHA VIVRAN DIYA HAI !

AAJ JO SAMAJ MEN SIRF DIKHAWE AUR BANAWAT KI HORH CHALI HAI US PAR ACCHA KATAKSHA
HAI !

"VAT VRIKSHA " JAISA GAMBHIR , SHANT AUR ,SHAKTISHALI VYAKTITVA KI AAJ AYASHYAKTA HAI.

JISKE VIDWATTA AUR GAMBHIRTA KI CHAYA SE SABHI KO GYAN KI SHEETALTA PRAPT HO !!



August 11, '08


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earmarkedfortrouble said:
GRRREEEAAATTTTTT!!!!
KYA BAAT KEH DAALI; MERE DOST; BUS; MAZAA AA GAYAA!!!!

August 11, '08


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sriangood said:
Wah wah kya lafz hain
kaya achche khyal hain
umdaa.

August 11, '08

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