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Posted on: Aug 11, '08

"AUR MAI"

               "AUR MAI"

Tu mujhe ek pal yaad rakh paati nahi,
Aur mai tujhe ek pal bhool paata nahi;
Ye tera dil hai jo mere liye dhadakta nahi,
Aur mera dil tere bin dhadak paata nahi;

Tu mere kareeb aana chahti nahi,
Aur mera dil tujhse juda reh paata nahi;
Kaise tu mere baghair jee paati hai,
Aur mai ek lamha tere bin guzar paata nahi;

Tu ne mere alawa kitno ko apna banaya hai,
Aur mai tere siwa kisi ko soch paata nahi;
Kitni rangeen hai saari basti teri,
Aur mai apna ghar bhi saja paata nahi;

Tere pyar ki kahani mein kitne naam likhe hain,
Aur mai tere alawa koi naam likh paata nahi;
Tu ne sheesha samajh kar mera dil kai bar toda,
Aur mai tera toot ta dil bhi dekh paata nahi;

Tu mujhe ek pal yaad rakh paati nahi,
Aur mai tujhe ek pal bhool paata nahi ............

                              Dear friends waiting for your valueable comments abt my poem.

                    Sahil Hashmi (+91-99233-68805).

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deep1843 said:

Very Nice, Whah,So Good

August 13, '08

Chat3140 said:
Fantastic!! Bole to ekdam zakash !!

August 13, '08

saturn2007 said:

DEAR IT IS SUPERB .FEELINGS R TOO EXCELLENT ND HEART TOUCHING ONE .LOVED IT.... A FRIEND ,WHO TREASURES EVERY HOPE AND DREAM....LUV U.

August 12, '08

tina6895 said:
hi
how r u
daily i got mails frms u
thanks alott.....
keep sending
i'll always wait for ur mail
i love 2 read ur poem
actually this is not only poem,i feel ur feelings frms this.
ek personal question puchna tha aapse.
ok
so all d best
waiting for ur next composition
bye
tc

August 12, '08

khushidey said:
"Tu ne mere alawa kitno ko apna banaya hai,
Aur mai tere siwa kisi ko soch paata nahi;
Kitni rangeen hai saari basti teri,
Aur mai apna ghar bhi saja paata nahi;"
Aaaaaaaawwwesom!!!! Kya baat hai!!!!

August 12, '08

sarafataliGEM said:
good thanx for sharing

August 11, '08

madhumitaCAP2000 said:
very nice good thanksfor sharing

August 11, '08

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