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CancerSA said: ![]() English plse! August 24, '08 |
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sriangood said: Saurah Bhai aap ne ek ayaam kaa khulaasa kiya. shukriya. mera yeh sawaal un jawaabon ka hai jo kayamat sa pahle yahin dene hai. once again gr8 shayari August 19, '08 |
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CRAZOO7 said: Bahut khub bhai!!!!!!!!!! Aj ki subah Mukkamal ho gyi August 19, '08 |
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binduhu said: my god... wat lovely wrds...interwoven to make a stanza.. beauty... thnx for sharing August 18, '08 |
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geetsudha said: August 18, '08 |
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saurabh55a said: Bhai srian , 'kayamat' ke din sabhi 'ruhon' ke dwara kiye 'kamo' ka 'hisab' hota hai . galat 'baton' aur 'bahano' se 'zinda insano' ko 'bahlaya' ja sakta hai, 'fariston' ko nahi, tab jo 'saza' mukarrar hogi, vah insano ki saza se jyada badi hogi, insano ki duniya me, 'insaniyat' ke 'virudhh' 'khata 'karne wale , 'farishton' ko kya jabab denge , yahi sawal hai shayri me..., August 18, '08 |
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kesharGemini said: Wah nice poem ![]() August 18, '08 |
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whirlwind2000 said: Bahut Khoob Saurabh ji ! AAj ke halat pe ye bahut hi teeksha vyangya hai ! " Quatilon ko masiha or masiha ko quatil samajh....." Bilkul sahi khaka khinch diya aapne !! ![]() August 18, '08 |
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tenjade_destiny said: hey, this is too heart touching saurabh...naked truths, untouched and served raw to us, it seems, a strange sadness each thought has in it, it dampens the heart... ![]() August 18, '08 |
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ashokthakur said: lovely shayri thanks August 18, '08 |
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