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manisha_bhattacharya said: ![]() You really are a great poetess Laila! September 16, '08 |
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KenFeatherlite said: Laila, O Laila Laila.. Ek Hindi ka purana geet arz hai; Tum jo hue mere humsafar, raste badal gaye. Lakhon diye mere pyaar ke, Rahon mein jal gaye... Mere apne favourite mein se ek hai. Ummed hai aap bhi pasand karenge? Ken (kabhi kam nahin bolte..) September 11, '08 |
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mohan2hot said: very nice ! September 05, '08 |
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ManojSmile2001 said: September 05, '08 |
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Bhoot-Bangla said: wah wah kya azeeb cartoons hain jo kuch bhi non sense comments kar ke chale jate hain... ![]() September 05, '08 |
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rajeev-on said: so Lailaa ... afterall u r a girl or a lady having a heart with full of love and waiting for a heart with full of love and who can step forward with u in each step of ur life .. but lailaa ... vo kaun hai jiskaa dil tumse bhar gayaa ... jise tum pukaar rahee ho , parantu jisko aapse milnaa gawaaraa nahee ... lailaa kahee eisaa to nahee , ki ... duniyaa jise kahte hai .. jaadu kaa khilonaa hai ..mil jaaye to mitti hai,kho jaaye to sonaa hai ... jinhe aap milee nahee , aap unke liye sonaa hai, kintu jise aap milee, uske liye aap mitti hai ... but lailaa ... mujhe jo milee wah aaj bhi mere liye sonaa hai , aur lailaa jo nahee milaa , wah to sonaa hai hee ... lailaa aap mere liye sonaa hai ...sincerely urs ...very good shaayree September 04, '08 |
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satish9984CAP said: nice shayari show analysis of dejection. September 02, '08 |
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mikunal said: what happen? why so sad all of a sudden? ![]() a lot to live why on kantoka sahara? ![]() September 02, '08 |
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Ike41 said: Helllo, 1. Am able 2 understand Urdu words but won't attempt expresing my thoughts in this language. The thoughts are rally Ur views o life & as some have said protray negative thoughts, do't really think so. 2. There r moments in life when one wants to be honest to oneself & U have done just that. That's the beauty of "Shayari" & U have succeeded in giving meaning 2 Ur thoughts through the verses. It's been beautifully done, C & keep it up. 3. U r the leader of the Fropper Gang introducing it 2 thought provoking write ups & FRIENDS have responded so nicely, whatever b the subject, am sure they r looking forward 2 the next one. This is what exactly is "Keeping in Touch", surely U r not contemplating shifting 2 another "Chaman". V won't let U, that's for sure, Folks U R with me on this!!! September 01, '08 |
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deen25 said: ae mere dil kahi aue chal, gum ki duniya se dil bhar gaya.... Dhuundh lep phir koi Ghar naya, Ae mere dil kkahi aur chal....... Nice poem Laila.......thx for sharing.........I like it September 01, '08 |
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