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Posted on: Sep 03, '08

" Nadi"

" NADI.."

Ek 'Pahchan ' ki ' bhookh',

karti rahi 'aamantrit 'mujhe..,
  ki mai roop dharun
ek 'Nadi ' ka ...,!!

Apne 'Udgam' se aage.. Jidhar bhi dikhe 'nichla-  'tal'..,
    'rukh 'mod lu vahan ..,

    apne   'istar 'se neeche ..,
   'chhitrai' -sukhi bezan dharti      se ..,
   gale milne.. !!

'saanp' ki tarah - lahrakar ,

nikal bhangu ..,
kheton ki 'medhon'par..,
aur ghus jaon -
'sarkandon 'ke jangal me..,
'Dudhmuhi ' ' komplon' ke
gal 'thapthapane'..., !!

'Anant nabh 'ke neeche..,

anant 'sabhytaon' ke 'shila lekh '..,
dube utrayen ,
meri gahan 'dharaon 'ke beech ..,
aur me choom kar, puchkar kar..,
bachchon ki tarah unhe 'dularkar,'
Badh jau 'aage..',
ek 'nirlipt Yogi ' ki tarah...!!

Chandni raat me..,

odhkar jhini chadar..,
   me banu 'Darpan.'.,
    'roop garvit' chand ko ,
     uska 'pratibimb 'dene..,
      ki vah dekh sake..,
       'ithlaye sondarya ' me ..,
         'chhitraya daag.'.,
       Ek 'shaswat satya' ki tarah..!!

Me banu 'sambal' ..,

  kisi bansuri ki dhun ka..,
Rambhati ggay -
gwalon ki 'ter 'se ..,
  kar lu 'gathjod.'.,
Itihass dar itihass ,
' Nischhal prem' ko duhrane..!!

'gande -badrang ' pani bhare anginit 'naaley.'.,
     aaen 'kilol 'karte , 'ghutno' ke bal..,
        aur sama jaye mere 'aanchal 'me..,
           dhool dhusrit 'shishu 'ki tarah..,
             ki me 'ponchh 'lu unke 'kalush'..,
               apne 'swaxchh' ,dhawal aanchal se..,
                aur chum lu unke muh..,
                      Ek ' alhadit '   'Maa ' ki tarah..!!

Raah me roken agar..,
hazaro hazar 'sahastrbahuon' ke
  hazaro haath..,

  To,
'Uffaan 'kar,
seena tan kar..,
Unhe baraj kar,
Singh si garaj kar..,
Kood padu ghoor 'pravah 'se..,
ki 'gunj 'jayen sari 'dishayen'..,
mere 'padghaton ' se 'videern' hoti ..,
                     Chattano ki 'aah' se..!!


'Nadi 'sa hokar..,
   sabhi ko' jaldhar 'me 'pirokar.'.,

   sapne dar sapne 'sanjo 'kar..,
  jab me pahuchu 'chhor' par...,
    Sagar ki ' Hilor' par ..,
                       to,
kho du apna 'naam'..,
dubo du apni 'pahchan'..,
  shesh na bache koi Raah,
   na 'Pravah ' na koi ' chah.'.,
  me banu bas ek 'bund 'us 'Sagar 'ki..,
    Anant nabh me..,
Jagmagate ..,
'Sudhakar' si..!!

                                     __' SOURABH '

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Valley_of_Roses said:
ati sunder...

November 14, '08

pravinvirgo2003 said:
bahoooot sunder kavita hai.

September 15, '08

tenjade_destiny said:
beautiful and very picturesque!! The river reflects flow of life as it runs. it portrays life flowing into end and death ultimately coming to it, as u said the river dissolves at the end.

September 11, '08

saurabh55a said:
Hi,
Srian , Gor 123,
Thnx 2 recognize the sprit of my poem,
A dissolve of river in sea is a visual "MOX",
can b realized through spritual vision, which u have ,

September 05, '08

Gor123 said:
A drop inwardly eager to lose its individuality in ocean is the top most "Advait Bhav" in this poem. You have point to point taken your Nadi to the ocean. The ocean is Partama. Bund Ban Gai Sagar!!!

September 05, '08

madhumitaCAP2000 said:
Insaan ke man mein umadti ichchaao ko nadi ke roop mein dhaal kar aapne manushyajeevan ka bahut hi achchaa varnan kiya hai .

September 05, '08

mediaperson2008 said:
Saurabh ji, sundar ati sundar.......

Nadi ke manind "kho du apna 'naam'..,
dubo du apni 'pahchan'..,
shesh na bache koi Raah,
na 'Pravah ' na koi ' chah.'.,
me banu bas ek 'bund 'us 'Sagar 'ki..,
Anant nabh me..,
Jagmagate ..,
'Sudhakar' si..!!"'"" Wah wah

September 05, '08

sriangood said:
sundar.
msg jo maine samjha.........
kitni bhi pehchan bana le koi
usko kho kar hi chain milta hai.

Aapne shabdo ko hamesha ki tarah hi badi khoosoorti se piro kar vicharon ki ek mala bana dee.

September 05, '08

whirlwind2000 said:
NADI AUR JIWAN KA AAPNE BAHOT HI JIWANT KHAKA KHINCH DIYA SAURABH JI !

AUR TASVIREN DAL KAR APNE APNI KAVITA MEIN JAN PHOONK DIYA !!

September 05, '08

binduhu said:
lovely pictures...very nice..
u have a natural art at poetry..

September 04, '08

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