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Posted on: Sep 05, '08

SEA AS I SEE !!

                 The most awesome creation of God
                  It is  shallow and it is deep
                  It makes you laugh
                  And it makes you weep !


                    The lashing waves hit the moss
                     Gathered thick on the rocks
                     Rub it and clean  it,
                     So is your heart , by its misty foam
                    When  you enter within it !


                    The sea is grand  , the sea is beautiful
                    The crimson red of the sunset
                    Spreads the aura of serenity and calm
                    Happiness , joy  , cheer and charm !


                     Life to many ,  shelters  myriad live
                     Beneath it , within it
                     On the surface of it
                     Flora and fauna   that thrive !!!

                     Oh God  spare us from its wrath
                     When its high and mighty waves
                     Annihilate and kill , end and destroy
                     Anything and everything in its path !

                This is the sea   as I see
                The most awesome creation of GOD !!!

Tags: different moods of sea

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manisha_bhattacharya said:
My my! You've really turned a poet now eh Avinash? Great going!

September 17, '08

wits-end said:
wah wah! keep going, avi.

September 15, '08

sazzyme said:
oyyye takin a jab at poems now?

i am a sucker to rhyming words and here u got that goin great guns and a whole slew of them..luv it.

awesome stuff u got there dude!
would serve well to make a beliver yet outta pagan/non-beleiver

September 11, '08

Titan71CAP said:
Very nice... It's indeed one of the marvels of creation! All praise be to Him, Lord of the worlds.

September 10, '08

Swettgal said:
You have captured the diff moods of sea in so beautiful words..

September 07, '08

Mydream2008CAP said:
You write beautifully friend.. Your poem has all the colours of the wind.. Just by the way,I came, I read and I got lost into the fathomless.

September 07, '08

Mydream2008CAP said:
You write beautifully friend.. Your poem has all the colours of the wind.. Just by the way,I came, I read and I lost into the fathomless.

September 07, '08

MARKIV14 said:
Whirlwind,

I was not wrong when I said, "new poet on the block",

I just saw the see, came here and saw it again,reminded me again of high tides.

Thanks a lot for sharing

Regards

Ciao

September 07, '08

InkTank said:
lovely verses! conveys the might n power of the sea beautifully...

September 06, '08

binduhu said:
b'ful avinaash..wat wrds..
lovely
i enjoyed the poerty
n its very well written..
kudos!!

September 06, '08

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