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Posted on: Sep 19, '08


 THE SKY !

                                              









                 
                    High  high and so  high 
                    Can  any one ever touch  the sky ? 
                    

                    You  change  your  colour  
                    You  change  your  mood 
                    You  exude  joy ,  
                    You  exude  fear 
                    You  bring  happiness 
                    And  you cause  cheer. 
                   
                     When  you are blue 
                     We all look up  to you   
                     For  a bright  shiny  day 
                     Full of  hope , actions ,
                     And  plans  to  make  the  hay  !

                     The  dark  clouded sky 
                     Causes    the  rains 
                     Wets  the parched  earth
                     Fills  the  rivers and ponds
                     And  summer-dried  drains.   
                     
                    But  when you are  pink 
                    In the dusk  and  dawn 
                    The beauty  sublime you spread 
                    The ambience, serene and  calm  
                    Heals our  body , soul 'nd  mind   
                    Like a cool and  soothing  balm.

                   Night brings  with  it 
                   All  the splendours 
                   All the  wonders 
                   Twinkling  stars and the  moon 
                   Planets  ,comets ,satellites
                   And  the feelings
                   We  are  never  alone .

                   You  show  us  your  fury 
                   You  show  us  your  might 
                   When  the  thunder roars 
                   And  the  lightning  strike.
                     
                     
                   
                    We  feel  so  dwarfed
                    Before  your  vastness oh  sky !
                    You  are  so  high, high and high                               Can  anyone  ever  touch  the sky???   
 
 
                     
                       
                                           
                                                                                          



Tags: high, small, vast




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whirlwind2000 said:
Kavita ! sky is the limit for my praise to such a nice comment by you !!



September 25, '08


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whirlwind2000 said:
Thanks Ken for making the great entry to my blogs !



September 25, '08


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KenFeatherlite said:
Hey whirlwind,
SKY!! Great way to pose that question ‘cans anyone?' The beauty of it in all its splendor with the sprinkle of the unknown and its uncertainties so poetically painted leaves a breathtaking scene in our minds.

Ken (lightening struck..)

September 25, '08


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CancerSA said:
Avinash, a truly splendid piece of writing and the different stages are so vividly depicted!
The pictures are definately the most apt finishing touch to a fantastic poem!
The sky is the limit Avinash,just like how she goes through the different phases and comes out shining again, so can we! Reach for the sky and touch her in all glory as she blesses as each new day dawns and looks down on us and encourages us to reach up to her, we can and we will .... she is the crowning glory we awake to each morning and puts us to sleep each night! I love the poem Avinash and u have profoundly outlined the simplicity of the sky with your mere words!

September 25, '08


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whirlwind2000 said:
Thanks a lot shakosh , for the visit to my blog and liking it !



September 23, '08


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shakosh said:
Very well written poem Avinash...
Enjoyed reading it......

September 23, '08


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whirlwind2000 said:
Thanks Nizar , sazzy ! and sazzy your comment is no less awesome than the sky !!



September 21, '08


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sazzyme said:
the poem is awesome nd so r the pix.
by a rule of thumb,anything be it a poem,pix,prose...on landscape...goes down extremely well with me..i luv it and u have done an awesome job of describing the whole gamut of changes that take place up in the world's ceiling/roof.

September 21, '08


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msnizar said:
beautiful pictures with simple poem and your way of writing is really appreciate,, and sorry for the delay

September 21, '08


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whirlwind2000 said:
Thanks Bindu for coming again to my blog and going in depth , it really gives me so much pleasure to that people like u , take so much interest in my writings ! I am proud of myself !

And what you say is very correct , you can take my poem as a challnge I have put before you all ! "Can anyone ever touch the sky ??" Enterprising and positive thinking people like you will say "Yes why not ?" With firm determination , will and effort anything is possible !!!

Thanks again Bindu !!!




September 21, '08

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