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Posted on: Sep 20, '08

SILENT THOUGHTS

Love is silent but it is bright,
     Even when it is past twilight.
As the Sun of joy will never set,
     Those lovely moments we can’t forget.

Breathing deeply to life’s song,
      Can we forget each other for long?
With you every moment I spent,
      All memories are strangely bent.

I missed for a while, your voice n the space,
      Still everyday I did a place.
Right at the table meant for two,
      Just for one and that is you.

I shall be the light and not the spark,
     You brought me back from the scary dark.
Rivers are flowing in the ocean deep,
     I can’t be the dew-drop that leaves can’t keep.

Melodies many a times remain inside,
      Today there is nothing to hide,
From our feelings deep within,
      For those times let the song begin.

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MARKIV14 said:
Merc,

So the merc arrived.. thanks for taking out time and reading.

regards

ciao

September 27, '08

MARKIV14 said:
silverlink,

thanks a lot.

ciao

September 27, '08

MARKIV14 said:
wits,

Thanks a lot for that applause.

ciao

September 27, '08

mercurytemper said:
"As the Sun of joy will never set,
Those lovely moments we can’t forget."

"I missed for a while, your voice n the space,"

"I shall be the light and not the spark,"

de r sum fantastic lines which could touch ny heart ..deep deep inside ....

September 26, '08

Silverlink said:
"I missed for a while, your voice n the space"
Nice line....Lovely post!!

September 25, '08

wits-end said:

September 24, '08

whirlwind2000 said:
VERY BEAUTIFULLY ADDED TWO NEW STANZAS MARK !

EMPHASISES THE EVERLASTING LOVE YOU HAVE , NOT LIKE MOMENTARY SPARK OR THE TEMPORARY DEW DROPS ,BUT LIKE THE PERMANENT FLOW OF RIVE WHICH MINGLES WITH THE SEA AND BECOMES ONE !

GREAT EMOTIONS !!!!!!

September 23, '08

madhumitaCAP2000 said:
I CAN'T BE THE DEW DROPS
THAT LEAVES CAN'T KEEP

THEY ARE BEAUTIFULL LINES.

NO ONE SHOULD EVER BECOME LIKE THOSE DEW DROPS
THEY MAY BE PRETTY
BUT FORGET YOU AS SOON AS THE SUN STARTS SHINING ON THEM

LOVELY POEM !!!

September 23, '08

MARKIV14 said:
Ink Tank and Titan

Thanks for dropping by and reading

Ciao

September 23, '08

MARKIV14 said:
Bindu,

Thanks for reading the addition.

yeah ideas and words are from someone somewhere. Come to think of it even the magic is also of someone somewhere, i am just a weaver...and the poem comes out.

please dont ask who is someone somewhere....hahahahahahahaha

Thanks for reading and saying such nice words

Regards
Ciao

September 23, '08

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