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Posted on: Sep 29, '08


 DRISHTI ( POEM IN HINDI )

दृष्टि 

तुम जब बात करते हो
अब सर्वहारा की
तुम्हारी शक्ल प्रायः ही
बाज जैसी हो जाती है
तुम्हारी दृष्टि में समाती है
दुनिया सहमी चिड़िया सी

तुम जब बात करते हो
अब किसी मंदिर की
तुम्हारी शक्ल प्रायः ही
कसाई सी हो जाती है
तुम्हारी दृष्टि में समाते हैं
विधर्मी स्थान बकरे से

काश तुम बाज की जगह
होते हरा वृक्ष
और कसाई न होकर तुम
बकरे की माँ होते
तो आज भी मेरी कविता में
फूल और तितलियाँ
अपने आप आ जातीं
काव्य-संसार में फैला रेगिस्तान
नखलिस्तान में बदल जाता
और मुक्त हो जाती कविता
सेठ की तिजोरी से
विचरण करने लगती
गाँव की पगडंडी पर. 

- शून्य आकांक्षी



Transliteration

Drishti 

Tum jab baat karate ho
Ab sarvhaara kee
Tumhaaree shakla praayah hee
Baaj jaisee ho jaatee hai
Tumhaaree drishti mein samaatee hai
Duniya sahamee chidiya see

Tum jab baat karate ho
Ab kisee mandir kee
Tumhaaree shakla praayah hee
Kasaaee see ho jaatee hai
Tumhaaree drishti mein samaate hein
Vidharmi sthan bakare se

Kaash tum baaj kee jagah
Hote hara vriksha
Aur kasaaee na hokar tum
Bakare kee maa hote
To aaj bhee meri kavita mein
Fool aur titaliyaan
Apane aap aa jaateen
Kaavya-sansaar mein faila registaan
Nakhalistaan mein badal jaata
Aur mukta ho jaatee kavita
Saith kee tijoree se
Vicharan karane lagatee
Gaanv kee pagdandee par. 

- Shoonya Akankshi



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kumars2k said:
Very good Sir

October 21, '08


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TiwariMinan said:
Dear Upadhyayji you are truly very talented with a beautiful mind It Reflects in your wrinting , Hey Buddy you have a Gods gift
So Cherished through out your life and Keep writing ! Whooo Hoo .
Warm Regards Minan . LosAngeles !

October 09, '08


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Pagal-Bhoot said:
ye tum hai kaun??

October 09, '08


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delhi-3 said:
good

October 08, '08


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eternalessencefoever said:
its beautiful with deep essence
ty 4 posting in both languages

October 07, '08


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alamara2000 said:
Very nice Sir, Your poetry has so much meaning and play of words and the way you express them, is just wonderful. I liked it very much.


October 06, '08


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Shubh58 said:
bahoot khub, kuch alag si hi hai aapki kavita. I like it, and yr shaili. keep it up. isi tarah likhte raho, khush raho, logo ko sandesh dete raho

October 05, '08


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Eralui_pra said:
Aadrniye ....aapki rachna 'DRISHTI' matr ek kavita nahin apitu samaj ke un behrupiye, nirdayi va darindeon ke khilaf ek shsakt awaz hein, jo smaj mein 'swet va kesria vastr dharn' kar baaj ki si drishti rakh, samaj ke hiit aur kalyan ke naam par apni swat rupi manokamna ko puri karne ke liye ...hamare dish ki unniti ko avnati mein parivartit karne ke liye...."Dharm ke naam ki nafrat va Jati-bhed bhav' ka sahra le hum ek -dusre mein aashanka ka beej bote hein. Jarrorat hein to inhein pahchankar, inke napak iradon ko nakam karne ki. Ye tabhi sambhav hein, jaab hum ek-joot ho kar inka muqabala karein aur apne desh ki unniti mein apna pura sahyog dein. Awhan rupi kavita ke liye meri vyaktigat badhai swikar kijiye...

Aadarsahit,
'Mitra'




October 05, '08


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Goodwill2001 said:
wah wah

October 03, '08


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saurabh55a said:
very nice poem,



October 03, '08

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