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Chiktu said: Well read it a few times, relieving my times, of simillar bliss and fulfilled desires. Incidently I tried to quit smoking and succeeded in the past because, the craving reduces day by day. BUt noticed the difference that the this craving and desire never deminishes by adbsence, it keeps increasing. The meaning of love and bond is greately expressed with such grip on words and emotions that I can not believe that the poet is so young. That way each time is new and the renewal of emotions is as well. Nice post. November 20, '08 |
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unflappable said: gr8 writing. October 19, '08 |
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LovelyStars said: Wonderful poem dear.   October 15, '08 |
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sun9009 said: wonderfully expressed..!!!!!  October 13, '08 |
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Latav2063 said: I read this many times. The images you have created here makes the poem more powerful, the passion is so real and felt throughout. There is also a feeling of a bitter- sweet bond. Quite an intense poem. October 12, '08 |
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Titan71CAP said: According to the holy Bible, Satan came to Eve in the guise of a serpent & lured her not only to eat the forbidden fruit, but also to pursue Adam to do the same... And according to the holy Quran, after eating the forbidden fruit they became aware of their naked selves & tried to cover their body with tree leaves... They were then condemned to the earth, 'Paradise lost'!!! They prayed for the mercy of the Lord Who did forgave them, but the life of the 'Serpent Desires' began... Very well written post. October 11, '08 |
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skb8715 said: Ultimately have to Thank for the experienced expressions which are near to truth   October 11, '08 |
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Dpai said:  October 10, '08 |
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manocarla said: i say like CancerSa nothing more need to express here if not  woooooooooo October 10, '08 |
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MY_MUSKAN said: very nice expression October 09, '08 |
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