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Chiktu said: Fantastic poem with great understanding. Thats right, every one's firsts start with the novels and comics and stories of empire builders and so on. Very nice, felt my days returned and rejuvenated me. Thanks for a great creation. November 19, '08 |
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geetsudha said: the first feeling of love is special,coz it has taught u hw beautiful love is,that feeling of freedom.love is innocent.mg sumi,u are excellent,u must take writing very seriously,itna athaah samudra hei tum mein seemit words ka,feelings ka,intelligence ka,i really am amazed.just pour out all that what is hidden in you, benakab kar do sab kuch,aur phir mahsoos karo us halkepan ko apne ander.great feeling.once you know how to be true,its so beautiful that you will never settle for being false.we go on deciding to be false because we have never tasted the real.one has to be responsible towards one's being.god is not going to ask you why you were not somebody else.i wud luv to see more poetry cuming our way from you dear.just superb,no other words for it.  November 03, '08 |
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IN_MY_BOX said: Humm, Wonder if it gave the same felling as the first Mills and Bonns kiss, (Sometimes few young hearts embrace guilt, Juvenile minds get ready to pay the debts later, Just anxious they are To exchange the delights and share the pleasure, Life promises constantly to them Many moments to come!!! And they are in no hurry to treasure) Sounds like time at Kinder school, Not being able to wait till dinner time, all of us unraping our chocolates, sharing what we had, Not in any hurrry to save what we had Nice very nice October 28, '08 |
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schatt00 said: well expressed... October 27, '08 |
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creativefront said: Feelings I can say in form of poem. Nicely written.     October 26, '08 |
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BrainyBakra said: Celebrate the happiness that life is always giving, make every day a holiday and celebrate just living! See the beautiful world around, my sweet Sumedha...  I like your philosophy as much as I love you, deary.... Youre cute... Happy Diwali to you October 25, '08 |
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MrStoryTeller said: October 25, '08 |
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kaps0601 said: First is always memorable... October 24, '08 |
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desire2 said: Wowwwwwwwww!!!! October 24, '08 |
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coolcol said: the first always holds a special place in ones life....but the first may not be the best always....may be the best is yet to happen..u know to get the best one must keep trying.... October 23, '08 |
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