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Posted on: Nov 06, '08

Virtual Love

Taaron se saji chamkthe gagan mein
Ubhare jab sudhakar apni hi dhun mein
Sharmaaye kumudini dulhan naveli si
Muskaaye dheere se mudith ho kar man mein.

Sunahare rangon ki chata laaye dinkar jab
Peele aur kaththai ka jang ho kheton me tab
Khilaake mukh apna preetham ke jaisa
Poorab se paschim tak saath chale hain sab

Aakash ko choothi si laharen saagar kee
Maano ve chaahe pahunch chandrama kee
Amaavas ho tho mache kolaahal
Poochchte hon jaise patha shashidhar kee.

Door khade parvath kee sharaarath na poocho
Bhaag rahe badaliyon ke jhundon se boojho
Maano ho bhed, aur Karen tithar bithar unhe
Chaah unme khone ki yah ehsaas na poocho.

Aaye jab saawan bichche baadal ghane
Apne pankh pasaar kar mayoor hain thane
Boondon ki shaturmurg ko bhi hai aas
Naache aise, jyon janamon ke bane.

Dekho prem ka yah bhi ek roop
Nahin koi bhi kiseeke anuroop
Lage hai mujhe yah bhi waisa hi
Kahe jise ‘virtual love’ ka swaroop.

Tags: sudhakar, kumudini, dinkar, saagar, parvath, mayur

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AshokAdvJBP said:
BAHut badiya hai

November 08, '08

sudheer555 said:
No words to praise. Beautiful. Superb.

November 07, '08

notjustart said:
That's cool! I liked it. Though some words of Hindi came as a bouncer, I understood the meaning in their context... thanks for sharing!

November 07, '08

samaksh2000 said:
As simple as knowing and believing analysis.virtual is believing oneself rendered to experiencing, thru confidence of conviiction. ppl with extra ordinary poetic gift find their sentiments bordering on suurrreal arena.savour more direct dimensions of intened feeling. the pervading kolahal arouused by lahriyan on ocean spurred by amavass ki akaash resonate a synergic vibration.some weird seizurre bemoans virtually.

November 07, '08

creativefront said:
Kya kavita hai!
'Virtual Love' ke vibhinn rang samaahit hein is kavita mein.
Aakash, Tare, Chandrama, Suraj, Khet, Saavan, Baadal, Barkha, Saagar, Laharein, Nratya, Mayoor, Muskaan ..... Sab ghoom rahe hein Love kee paridhi par vibhinn kakshaaon mein. Theek vaise hee jaise ki padaarth kee sanrachana mein electrons ghoomate hein.
Yahee kavita kee khoobee hai. Dil se nikalee aavaaj jo hamesha buddhi se adhik prabhaavshaali hoti hai.
Ek sundar kavita ke liye bahut-bahut dhanyavaad mitra.

Five star too.

November 07, '08

Valley_of_Roses said:
5

November 06, '08

Valley_of_Roses said:
AAP ITNA ACCHA KIUN LIKHTI HEIN? KI MERE SHABDKOSH MEIN...MAIN SHABD HI DHUNDTI RAH JATI HUAN...'ATI SUNDER'!!!

November 06, '08

tenjade_destiny said:
nice depiction...though certain words are beyond my comprehension...

but one thing for sure, u write awesome

November 06, '08

kesharGemini said:
thanks for sharing heat touching poem.

November 06, '08

bharat7772 said:

"BEAUTIFUL"; AND THANX FOR SHARING DI..
di mei bhi ek baat share karna chahta hu..
Samaksh2000 ke comments padhe, kai baar padhe aur jab uske baad bhi samajh nahi aaye to apne alp gyan par bahut glani mahsus hui aaj mujhe..
MUJHE AAP LOGON SE BAHUT KUCHH SEEKHNA HAI..

November 06, '08

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