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Posted on: Nov 14, '08


 The Moral

With the advent of dawn,
The Sun, rising……
Starts another day!
Another day for doing things…
Acts, that needs adjectives!

I see a pair of birds…
Fluttering, chirping, perching branches…
The tree remains unperturbed.
They celebrate their day
Gather their world…
Fly places unknown….
Come, back to the bonds
Bonds, since they lived…

The feat, undisturbed
Survival the motive….
Adaptation the key….
The fit survives…
The weak shall perish
And fossils remain…

Immortal deeds…
Decide about …..Mortal survival

Let the day start again…
The same Dawn and the Sun..
The sane drive to survive…
Will help us all….
…..live.



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cre8ive27 said:
U sure have a way with words!!!


December 03, '08


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manisha_bhattacharya said:
Awesome!

November 30, '08


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rashbhu said:
Nicely written. Keep it up. Simple & Lovable
LIFE is like that only "SURVIVAL FOR THE FITTEST"

November 22, '08


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Gor123 said:
so simple and detailed description of the fact of life in general, in a very few straight forward words.

November 17, '08


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chithrajust said:
-----------luvvvvvvvly lines------great thoughts---------smooth flow------apt words-------i'd like to disagree on the title though--------moral to me sounds very didactic and 'out of the books'-------it's life you're talking about; and life is an experience; every bit of it is-------

November 17, '08


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THOMAS6895CAP said:
WELL WRITTEN ! KEEP IT UP,YOU ARE SO NICE. I LOVE YOU MY DEAR.

November 16, '08


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MyZoneCAN said:
Great stream of thoughts...like the dawn of a not yet cold winter, with a little fog and muted sunlight. Great post!

November 15, '08


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sridhara55 said:
Everybody is in search of that evasive happiness which is locked-up within our own hearts..the name of the game is to search for the key which is possible by co-vibing with each other, friends !!!!
wonderful blog, Rajiv
full 5 stars

November 15, '08


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tenjade_destiny said:
wonderful depiction of drive to survive, and at another look at this fine poem, rajiv, I like it even more. It has an easy, natural way of saying things without trying too hard to be poetic. It all adds up to being a real poem because it strikes into feelings and moves all of us, at least for me. In my opinion, that's what a true poem should do.


November 14, '08


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sazzyme said:
and on second thoughts and second read..i luv the words..chirping,perching branches..

and of course..lol..ACTS that need ADJECTIVES ..

as in darn excllent(adj) blogging (act)

November 14, '08

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