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Valley_of_Roses said: Wah...Wah Monu Mian... "Yaaro naye mausam ne yeh ehsaan kiye hai Ab yaad mujhe dard purane nahi aate Udne do parindon ko abhi shokh hawa me Phir laut ke bachpan ke zamaane nahi aate"    November 22, '08 |
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SAM_THE_HITTER said: November 19, '08 |
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zuveriya100 said: kanha gayei the kavita lenei jangle me?  November 18, '08 |
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Chat3140 said: SUBHAN ALLAH!! BAHOT KHUB LIKHA AAPNE. "Palkein bhi chamak uthti hai sote me hamari Aankhon ko abhi khwaab chhupaane nahi aate Dil ujdi hui ek saraaye ki tarah hai Ab log yahaan raat bitane nahi aate" TOO GOOD!! Dil” ka dard jab panno par Aa jata hai ”Ek” Aansu b dariya ban jata hai ”Dil” k Tutne ki “Aawaz” bhi nahi aur Sara dard “GAZAL” ban jata hai. November 18, '08 |
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creativefront said: 'Udne do parindon ko abhi shokh hawa me Phir laut ke bachpan ke zamaane nahi aate Is sheher ke baadal teri zulfon ki tarah hai Yeh aag lagate hai,bujhane nahi aate' Ati sundar. Likhate raho dost yun Achchha lagata hai. Naye shaayar ka panapana Achchha lagata hai. Ek kali khilati hai, fir doosari, fir teesari, poore bageeche ka mahakana Achchha lagata hai. 5 star for this. November 17, '08 |
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nisha264 said: very nice. November 17, '08 |
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PAAARUUULL said: kya baat hai yaar arey humari poems to apki shayari ke aage kabhi nahi tik payengi marvellous shayari vikram November 17, '08 |
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pyaar_ishq_mohabbat said: ek dam jhakaas hai bidu.lage raho munoz bhaai.  November 17, '08 |
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friendship1577 said: Lovely and heart touching. November 16, '08 |
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MYGANG2006 said: lagta hain tum ishq me har gaye ho!!!!!!!! atlast icould say FANTASTIC November 16, '08 |
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