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Posted on: Nov 20, '08


 Reptile Part 2

Reptile Part 2

One month has passed since Suman left Delhi and settled in this Santhal village in Jharkhand. His school friend Ramesh Sharma has been staying here alone for 20 years and runs a tribal school.
The place is in the forest, the ppl. are very simple and friendly. Apart from Ramesh, 2 other local men, who passed School Final exam, starting their education from Ramesh's school, are also teaching. Suman takes causal classes on Math. After school hours, two friends go for a walk in the forest and returns before sun set. Ramesh often insists Suman on going back to Rupa. Ramesh says, "You should go back. Rupa is alone there for a long time". Suman says, " Atleast Rupa Roy is never alone. She is surrounded by her admierers and lovers all day." He continues," Rupa"s attraction is irresistable. I know well, she does not love me. She treats me as one of her admierers. She confessed, she does not love any man. She does not know how to love. But I have burnt my wings like an insect in her fire of beauty. I have no way to come out. In fact, I have kissed a reptile. The reptile has wrapped me head to toe. I burn in the fire of poison. But I have to stay with her. I can not exist without Rupa. I live for her, I shall die for her. She said, she will release me if I want. Now I shall go to her and surrender myself to Rupa Roy".

Next morning Suman caught the train for Delhi. The train left the station. Ramesh was standing alone in the platform.


Suman is a hero in real life. Unlike filmy heros, he did not cut the head of reptile by his sword. In stead he acted like an anti hero. He surrendered to the reptile. This happens in reality.

I am sorry, my hero did not get any clap from the audience.



Tags: love, reptile, surrender




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gariahatCAP said:
Dev
Tumi dekchi Sumaner upar khub rege acho.
Suman jodi Napunshak hoto tahole narir mohe
pagol hoto na. Prem manush ke swargasukh dite
pare, aabar premer mohe manush narak jantrana
bhog kare. Prem baro rahasyamoy. Aar Ruper charitra Kabigurur bhashay,"Naha mata naha konya,naha badhu sundari rupashi, hey nandan bashini Urbashi".

December 05, '08


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DEVDAS1953 said:
SUMAN KI "NAWPUNGSHAK", NAKI ORO PECHANEY GONDHO ACHEY. NA HOLEY OTO KICHUR POREOY SE RUPA'R MOTO STREE KE MENEY NEI KI KOREY. SUKHBINDAR'ER B'DAY JABAR BAHANA KI TARI LOKKHON!!!NAKI SUMAN'ER EI SWABHAV'ER JONNOI RUPAR PROTISHOD SPHIHA. JANINA - BUJHINA - HA BHAGABAN !!!!!!!!!!

December 05, '08


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manisha_bhattacharya said:

How is he going to live a lie? For how long?
And why is she like this?

December 01, '08


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painterofbeauty said:
abt exp1,2,India:
U have the eye of the writer:-)
Amit=tragic hero, cowardly about expression. Medically questionable disease,influenced by melodramatic bengali and hindi movies.
Subha=under-rated. women are far tougher than that, i find it difficult to accept that she could not forget Amit.Her character is traditional family saving sacrificer(why do we expect her to be plain? Is it because if she had been beautiful...?)
Ur protagonist ( isn't it funny that i have already forgotten his name?!!): Well-meaning, bumbling, on-the-rebound-husband, experimenter?
Why does he get drunk because he does not have the heart of Subha? Why did he not get the heart of Subha?
What was his short-coming? Did he hold out his good deed as a weapon & thereby killed off gratitude?
Raj=symbolic dichotomy...is it abt d village u hv written or abt us? D vilage exists without doubt, I hv seen such even now :-)



December 01, '08


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painterofbeauty said:
Number one, bagher mashi's dada maney bagher mama!
Thanks for ur scrap, tho' u do not accept mine.

Ur hero may exist in real life and I feel he has become softened by modern urban life. It is encouraging that he goes into the forest. maybe he will find that sweat and cuts are more desirable than the comfort of cars and aircon.

Rupa, a bit too cut-and-dried for me. Seems like a cardboard cut-out. mamshri, suggest u write reptile part 3 from her side. What drives her behaviour? Sexual non-fulfilment? Childhood abuse?Love of gifts? addiction to risk? What motivates her behaviour?
U know I am self-confessedly a reptile, a crocodile. reptiles have clear patterns of behaviour which is rooted in instinct.
What drives her?
And ur protagonist might find himself if he studies the jungle closely.

Good read! Thanx for sharing.

November 30, '08


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November 22, '08


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pRINCESzONE said:
I SURRENDER ONLY FOR GOD's LOVE AND i'm vessel of the LORD IT's encourage me to use to be. thx a lot for your invitation my friend .

November 21, '08


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pRINCESzONE said:
"LOVE is hard to resist" in POLISH language is some joke becouse of meaning the word "pokoj" it is mean in english peace or room when you used {love as an emotion and love as an activity } the question is:

"What 's the difference between a warmonger and a student?"

the answer is :
"A warmonger has no love for peace, and a student has no room for love"

ha ha ha so did 't it?

some kind of humans are as a freak when fallin in L O V E ,but is it l o v e or infatuation .?! that is way where i knew about it and it is tragedy when love never be reciprokate. I VOTED GOOD POST

November 21, '08


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Pagal-Bhoot said:
its not heroism...
its like killing of himself for a reptile...
total stupidness...

November 20, '08


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tenjade_destiny said:
another story of sacrifice and heroism...great!!!! To me, suman sounds more like a scapegoat, who merely surrendered to circumstances......may be he has his own reasons, unknown..

November 20, '08

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