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Posted on: Nov 22, '08

Blue And Blue Always Blue

Curious eyes searching through
In the dark walls of the cave
A crevasse pouring in light
Blue unlimited was the sight
Happy to see sat for a while
A walk in endless – a minds wile
To reach the other end,
I traveled through
Fascinated with a phew
What do I name it
A cipher, a hallow ball
Extent beyond perception
But the one that could endure
Heat unlimited without a sigh
Blasts and bangs
Churns and chokes
Nothing effected.
Blue and blue always blue
Travel and travel without a clue
Unfathomable and unknown
No matter how far I go.
Under the closed eyes
There was a sky
Full of experiences burning
And the sorrows chilling
Kith and kin rotating n revolving
Exploding at the moments call
Pieces growing to fill in again…….
Seeping waters from roof of the cave
Restoring reality of the sinking sun
A sudden activity few yards ahead
Chased me out of the cave
I know I was followed by those
Dark thoughts, ‘fear of inevitable’.
An unfulfilled desire to see
The stalactites and stalagmites
Kept hollowing me like termites.

Tags: cave, sky, blue, formations

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sudheer555 said:
ThanX for sharing a nice narration.

November 25, '08

notjustart said:
That's a good example in Poetry that borders on abstractness, liked it very much!

November 24, '08

Valley_of_Roses said:
lovely Di...

"A sudden activity few yards ahead
Chased me out of the cave
I know I was followed by those
Dark thoughts, ‘fear of inevitable’.
An unfulfilled desire to see"...

November 23, '08

samaksh2000 said:
towards the other end.. the premise treads on ...adapting ..in stride tomorrowa .. each of them ..up they come crashing grasping wrapping in and gonnna fly by...

November 23, '08

binduhu said:
i love the blue..n the blues too
nice one..

November 23, '08

sanjaysg5 said:
Blue And Blue Always Blue,,it's good

November 23, '08

rita1234CAP said:
nice poem.

November 22, '08

gariahatCAP said:
A good poem I just read.
Thanx for sharing.

November 22, '08

thepatriot2008 said:

unfulfilled desires and wishes comes alive through words I must say!! description is marvellous, words and feelings straight from the heart!

November 22, '08

BIREN1237 said:
very nice poem dear
I like this poem..for one thing it tells alot..It sings of pain and lonliness.
Thank you for the very heartfelt words....very appreciated....

November 22, '08

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