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Posted on: Nov 22, '08


 While in love

When I got stunned with just one thought.
And kept forgetting the rest of the lot.
When a picture flashes on my inward eye.
Makes my senses reel…
And, I am lost on the winding road.
With the next turn on the, wheel.

When I am lost within the hue.
And keep plummeting with every cue
When night gets longer than the day.
Keeps me awake for all the night…
And, I am lost in the bed
With paper and pen, scribbling..... red

When all my time is lost thinking.
And the entire world seems just as still
When a warm wind blows outside of me
Makes my feelings numb…
And, I am slumping in my chair.
With all my works to spare

When everything, stops just at you
And all the rest just had to vest.
When all the stars and the skies
Are meant for none but, you….
And, I am awe struck  by your thought
With all my being in just your slot.



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khushidey said:
beautiful expression!!

December 01, '08


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bablee66 said:
ya.it does sound melancholic...

November 28, '08


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impeccabledude said:
stunned or stoned, lol.
Nicely articulated. I wish i could do that well.

November 25, '08


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sazzyme said:
and
how the mighty fall

November 24, '08


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rollercoaster2001 said:
thats not a love song.....it is the cause and effects

November 24, '08


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rashbhu said:
That's LOVE LIFE.

November 24, '08


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ladyinred17 said:
Thats the power of love....stuns the senses, all and sundry fade into the oblivion, sleep ceases to exist.......has this person just fallen in love and is overworked? whew...quite a situation to be in...lol....work acalling, senses not in control....he is smitten and a goner ....
lovely verses

November 23, '08


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Gor123 said:
"When everything, stops just at you
And all the rest just had to vest."

"When I got stunned with just one thought
And kept forgetting the rest of the lot."

Standing at one point...that point of course is the one which is LOVE. Nicely worded. a good read

November 22, '08


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kabir_1962 said:
What happens some times.
Person goes dumb and don't know what to say in love,
It becomes a state of confusion and ........
By the way nice words stated.

November 22, '08


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sanju_0101 said:
I think it is the best part of love.when one gets it there is no further seeking.afterwards it is complete submerge and sublimation of desire and seeking.

anyway as usual a great post.



November 22, '08

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