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Anonymous_Indian said: You have very good vision friend December 15, '08 |
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tenjade_destiny said: i am simply speechless after readin this...u have captured the common sight in such a different way, wow, it is simply tantalising...kudos to u dear...  December 14, '08 |
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tearose2002 said: A very sensitive poem ....its something we see yet remains unseen  thanx Rajiv for sharing December 14, '08 |
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SPIRITUALS said: Very lucid and lurid narration of the solemn life of a labourer's wife ,who too is one , working on the site ,living in a makeshift ramp with apple of her eyes ,the only child and how she loves and cares about it!!!She works with the clutter of steel amidst the rumble of gravel" whole day just to keeep her child away from hunger ,her world which she clutches and wraps !!! A touchy poem stirring the emotions deep down "beating down the heart below" at the diaphragm, where we feel pain and anxiety !! The poem brings to life everything that springs from the ramp ,with magnificent overtones of empathy towards the hapless !!!! Beautiuflly rendered !! But the title defies the theme , revolving around the agonising life of a mother, who is more than a wife !!! December 13, '08 |
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madhumitaCAP2000 said: reminds me of ----WOH TODTI PATHHAR----by Nirala ji---may be I am forgetting or mixing up with dinkar ji ----bit the poem is WOH TODTI PATHHAR great work Rajiv your poems are so relevent --though maybe the language is slightly abstract   December 10, '08 |
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sazzyme said: oh no must u do this to me everyday? that feeling of..aah never mind.. man...that kinda i duno.. i didnt make any sense did i?:sigh: but..ya know something raj...she must be alright..happy, content....for how does it go? the heart does not desire what the eyes....???!!! get the drift? December 03, '08 |
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chithrajust said: --------i'm rendered speechless buddy; you've certainly roller coastered your way into my heart-----that beats below---------- December 02, '08 |
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kabir_1962 said: Yeah its true and can be seen every where may be matero city may be small town. Very few care for it and write. December 02, '08 |
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manisha_bhattacharya said: This is amazing Rajiv! The scene that we look at everyday, but don't see...loved the way you show it! December 02, '08 |
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Titan71CAP said: Excellent! December 02, '08 |
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