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Posted on: Feb 13, '09

Let me free ........

Just happen to read Sonikudi's blog , Can I have my first dance please? the link to which is provided below, and couldn't stop scribbling few lines which are racing through my mind,

Link to Soni's blog:

http://www.fropper.com/posts/28453

Let Me Free.........

Why is it that all the liberties are for you?
And for me it’s just a few?
Why are you looking at me, that way?
Isn’t what I said is true to say?
Haven’t I said this before?
Or is it that you haven’t heard me before?
So what? If you can’t treat me as a wife, sister or mother
I have always treaded you as a husband, brother, father.
Have you ever wondered what if you have no mother?
Where from is it that you got to have a new brother?
Do, I have the liberty to wed or the liberty to breed,
It’s tears that I am allowed to shed, and tend to your greed.
Why is it that, the things that you do is fine,
But when it come to me it becomes a crime?
If today you don’t attend to my need, and let me free,
Soon the only thing you will miss is me, me and me.

Tags: liberty, crime, women, need, love

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Bratsarebest said:
Soon the only thing you will miss is me, me and me.

hey doll, is that a promise? Will you make sure that I miss you? chatterbox like you is good to be missed often. Take care what you say.

February 19, '09

Sailor79 said:
ha ha... last 2 lines reminds me of...
Love is like a bird -
You hold it tightly, it dies
You hold it lightly, it flies
You hold it nicely, it shits in your hands.
So forget love ....n do ha ha ha !!
don't know if its related to ur thoughts here.. but then me can comment what i feel like..

n at times me do ask her...hey girl me not holding u too tight na??

February 18, '09

sazzyme said:
coz THEY are 'fraid,
for if they let women BE,
they risk playing second fiddle to the weaker sex!

go figure!!!!

awesome write up expresses the indignation at established crap of the world we live in.

February 13, '09

ASYLUM said:
freedom's in the mind. you don't need anything from anyone to be free. sure, there'll be a lot of whining & lectures when we do as we want but apart from that.. we're all free.

February 13, '09

tanu1952 said:
freedom is our birth right and we shall have it. no one can chain us for long.nice expression.

February 13, '09

Pradip57 said:
Where her silence doesn't communicate, she should learn to protest. Anyay je kore arr anyay je sohe tabo ghrina jeno tare trino samo dohe.

February 13, '09

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