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soniya2000san said: its very nice .But dont be so sad thinking that khata kiski thi? jo hota hai acche ke leye he hota hai! July 31, '09 |
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creativefront said: Nice Gazal.  July 12, '09 |
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papi2001 said: niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee poem dude  hats of to you  July 07, '09 |
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north4748 said: realy it's nice poem.tumhari sari poem sad full kyu hoti hai.kisne dhoka de diya. June 10, '09 |
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lovedude_cbi said: khata kisi ko ho khatawaar main ban gya tere qatl ka zimewaar main bun gya zinda the tum, magr saabit yeh hua ki teri maut mein haath mera nikla! u r becoming an emotional 'fool' oops! poet June 02, '09 |
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jitesh71 said: wah wah bahut khub dost. Kya baat hai. dil ko chuu liya.  June 01, '09 |
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diya1992 said: Lovely poem. May 31, '09 |
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rama8135 said: aachi kavita hai thanks May 31, '09 |
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Sil80 said:  May 31, '09 |
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rajusec said: ye jo teri ankhon ki nami hai wo to teri yadon ki parchhayi h,itna mat soch mere dost ki khata kiski h,dubne ko to kistiyan kinare pe bhi jati haur bich samander me bhi sambhal jati h isme khata kiski h May 31, '09 |
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