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creativefront said: 'मन - उमंग, उठी तरंग हर्ष कण - कण में जगाया आया सावन आया ...' Achchhi kavita likhi hai dost.  October 04, '09 |
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lovedude_cbi said: kaash ki main bhi yeh nazaara dekh paata. Humare yahan to barsaat munh chhupati phir rahi hai! Nevetheless, nice redention!  July 04, '09 |
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swapnil823 said: very nice July 03, '09 |
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staytuned said: Rains bring in joy. Always a source of inspiration to poetry. Verses that shower delightful droplets. July 03, '09 |
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Typhoon007 said: Kaun kahan kis se kahe, bheege man ki baat ! Plak-Plak ki ot me, Sawan ki barsat !!  July 03, '09 |
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Gutz24 said: Saawan ki jhoomti bahar ka yowan bade hi sajeelta se pesh kiya gaya hai. Aankhon ke samaksh mor aur papihe ko jhoomta dekh sakte hain mano... Chandra you have weaved a picturesque poetry & the pic is simply fabulous. Lovely lines.  July 03, '09 |
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saurabh55a said: Nice Poem ! July 02, '09 |
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geetsudha said: कोयल की कुहू में हैं अदभुत संगीत रचना मोर पुकार सुनाये विरह व्याकुल भावना मन - उमंग, उठी तरंग हर्ष कण - कण में जगाया आया सावन आया ... baarish ki in boondon ka kuch eisa asar,ki mor naach uthe, koyal kook uthe, aur jiyra machal uthe. and the picture u hv uploaded makes me आया bahar laaye,ras ki fuhar laaye,ankhiyon mein pyar laaye......bas man khil utha chandra,so butiful. July 02, '09 |
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eternalessencefoever said: Lovely verses to welcome the onset of monsoon. The rains romancing all... sahi kaha..aaya Sawan jhoom ke.... July 02, '09 |
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ladyinred17 said: sawaan is yet to touch the capital in totality. lovely lines. tc. July 02, '09 |
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