Posted on: Jul 10, '09
Making of a Poem.... A thought..... A Whisper !!!
Trust me!!! I have always found it hard to understand what goes on in the mind of a writer, when those so called ‘creations’ are brewing in his mind – which later gets tagged as a short story, essay, an article or a poem as the reader perceives the words in its right earnest…. Though all others are based on ‘concrete cement of sound logic’ …. Poems are always intriguing…..
Long ago, I had tried to capture those feelings I underwent in one of the most wonderful moment of my life - The result was a poem – “Rainbow of Passion”…. What I am posting is a ‘reflection’….. Merely a copy & paste work of my inner most feelings, which failed to see the ‘living daylight’ when it mattered most!!! (The poem did make it, Hope the feelings will make some sense now…)
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This was a special sunset, the very best I had seen at Goa. The orange to crimson paint spread across the blue ocean was just a reminder of the divine beauty, which was so different from the aura it generally holds!!! It was sheer magic to me, the magic for an evening of anticipation, hope, shuttle thoughts… Hmmm…. An evening so full of life!!…. It was an evening of Love!! I had just proposed & she had graciously slipped off with a shy & spark, so typically hers…. An Epoch seemed to pass & the darkness was lit by a million stars, with the moon at its glory!! O my God, I simply fell in love with Love….
“In the distant far, the mighty Sun ready to dip,
This twilight is brighter than day.
Rising moon has the entire horizon to sip,
Twinkling stars also have their say!”
It was an angel walking towards me… The tides held still… The heart missed a skip… Suddenly the ‘bonfire’ was all life, the fire so soothing…. Warmth in my heart… Arm spread for that bear hug… My Nymph came near & I felt her glow brighter than Ivory…. Her grace ever so elegant…. Eyes met, souls talked…. There was silence, yet music was played in the hearts!! O my God, I truly love this Love….
“The raging ocean stunned to silence, mere witness to thy grace,.. O Nymph! You are the Rainbow of my passions,
"Ray of Hope" -for thoughts my season,”
Fingers touched fingers… Hand; the glove, love was euphoric & souls elated… I held her head & brought it close…. The lips moist, willing to lock…
“Labyrinth my action without reason,”
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The alarm went off & I was awake…. O God I love this Love tilll it lasted
“And you the reality in a Blissful way!
Yes... You the reality in a Blissful way!!!!!!"
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Love is not just blind…. It can be unreasonable, crazy & funny at times… Now if such feelings of heart get ‘integrated in your head’….. Well that’s a poem for you!!!!
"RAINBOW OF PASSION"
“In the distant far, the mighty Sun ready to dip,
This twilight is brighter than day.
Rising moon has the entire horizon to sip,
Twinkling stars also have their say!
The raging ocean stunned to silence, mere witness to thy grace,.. O Nymph! You are the Rainbow of my passions,
"Ray of Hope" -for thoughts my season,
Labyrinth my action without reason,
And you the reality in a Blissful way!
Yes... You the reality in a Blissful way!!!!!!"
O Nymph... Where ever you are.... Thanks for the Rainbow !!!!
Tags: unreasonable, feeling, thoughts, poem, love, reality, crazy, funny
Thnx for sharing 
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