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Elusive Enigma



Posted on: Oct 18, '09


 Dawn

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(As the subject struck me, my imagination took flight on two separate wings.
Which one do you prefer and why?) 

DAWN

Dawn, a pictorial, tingling word that strikes the heart 

Stirring vivid flashes of untold, soft,
velvety, feelings and muffled thoughts

Flirting
with 
colourful, 
fresh
with colourful, fresh visions
of picturesque  landscapes

Tantalising and
pearly dew drops 
on petals 

Rapturous
sounds of
chirping
birds and
gurgling brooks 

Of gentle awakening from dreams 
and liberation from nightmares 

From sleep to reality stretching 
languorously and deliriously 

To the anticipation of another phase of life
A fine, invisible line dividing consciousness
from drowsiness

Crossing the threshold of a very recent past
into the oncoming present
Embracing hidden, futuristic hopes

Subtly evoking nature’s magnificence
Sensuousness and mysteries

A state of fragile delirium
Brief, fragmentary, illuminating
A delicious, cherished and radiant moment
A glowing, relishing instant when reality dawns
Giving way to routine life! 


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DAWN

Luminosity filtered in,
accompaned by
a soothing breeze
And
a lingering fragrance
 
Provoking the curtains
to waltz to their
rhythmic harmonious tune
Gliding over softly in their reluctance to disturb!

In this semi state of consciousness,
I sense an invisible, magnetic
Yet positive presence watching over me
With a puzzled expression!

The blowing breeze lifts strands of my hair
Chivalrously requesting for a dance
A request which can not be denied!

A quiet debate ensues
In which Breeze and Fragrance
Oppose Light
“Don’t wake up the sleeping damsel!”

Unknowingly Fragrance fans my cheek faintly
Silken Breeze breathes in my ear

And Light flashes over my eyelids
My eyelashes flutter
Languor is gently overpowered ... While it softly dawns upon me that DAWN is here! 











POETIC SOUL






                



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TiwariMinan said:
My Friend Beautifully Written
From your Beautiful Mind ....
Very Intresting and Impressive
Writing ... Your writing has
Beauty & Grace, Thanks for shareing !
Warm Regards MINAN. LosAngeles.

November 21, '09


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Sufiyaana said:
SubhanAllah I guarantee this to be.. not only the best blog on Fropper.. but among the most beautiful poems I've read because they're written with the soul from the heart

November 18, '09


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Poeticsoul said:
Thanks for your reactions dear friends. When I was writing "DAWN," my imagination went flying and two different poems came into creation. I was in a dilemma! Which one to publish? To ease matters, I posted both of them!

November 18, '09


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ROHIT2083 said:
beautiful poems...both the poems are too good and pics are also beautiful too....and poems with pics, makes lot of difference...no doubt that ur poems are excellent...THANKS FOR SHARING THIS LOVELY POEMS OF DAWN...

November 14, '09


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Mr_Sofistication said:
Salutations for saluting nature in such a glorious way. Two poems ..two dimensions..two angles..two directions : one destination. Dawn unveiled poetically

November 13, '09


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Gor123 said:
dawn is so vividly and truly described that whoever can describe in this way can surely have the spirit in their life because after cominf of dawn all activity in this universe get started. secondly dawn brings light, prakash in the life, it gives perception along with activity. you know something with innerlight. this dawn brings inner light too.
The great ppl alwys look at the dawn because they have good hopes for them and for the other ppl and only dawn can bring them to reality.

November 12, '09


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Immortal_legend said:
How well Dawn is described!!!
First poem, I quote, 'A fine, invisible line dividing consciousness from drowsiness'

Second poem: 'A quiet debate ensues
In which Breeze and Fragrance
Oppose Light'

These are just two quotes..I could go on quoting both poems entirely. Not possible to choose or it would be unfair. Each poem is different and both are masterpieces

November 11, '09


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Peace_N_Luv said:
Soulful blog. A visual and intelellectual feast

November 11, '09


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Stylissh said:
Read both poems again and again..enriching experience of creativity, fact and imagination. It dawned on me that you're not only a good but an excellent poetess Ms Poeticsoul . Keep on writing so that simple people like us can enjoy good poetry

November 10, '09


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Shaan_4_U said:
Ode do Dawn magnificently expressed the way God created that magical time You're a real Poetic Soul

November 08, '09

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